Premiere Contest WinnerOld Vines

A clamorous stream of jar fly voices punctuates the dusky air,
their timbale orchestra madly vibrating raucous sound.
Hand brushing hand, we stand in the garden’s waning light, 
where fall’s pungent, spicy extracts flick from curling dry-leaf tongues,
needling tears that veil your tender gaze.
We are burning the nightshade garden, clearing summer’s fading feast,
our fires lanterns on a hallowed meadow eve;
sharp scented, sinewy tomato plants pitched to hungry flames hiss like snakes,
the stray fruits sizzling, then exploding in bursts of juicy seed. 
You lean toward me and shadowed silhouettes twine together like old vines.


Copyright, September 15, 2015
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ashley Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Returning with congratulations Faye on your wonderful win with your amazing poem.
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 7:22 PM
Congratulations, Faye, a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
Scars Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:42 AM
great imagery! loved it thank you and congrats :)
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November 18, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win, Faye.
Whitmore Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Congrats on your win this is a beautiful poem, I love the bursting of the fruit in the end.
Ashley Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations Faye on your number one placement with this beautifully written poem. Spectacular last line to end a superb write!
Berggren Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Nice job here. I like the last line a lot."You lean toward me and shadowed silhouettes twine together like old vines." Congratulations on you win.
Canerdy Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Dramatically descriptive poem, Faye. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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November 13, 2017 at 8:29 AM
This is gorgeous, Faye! Congrats on your win.
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November 13, 2017 at 6:38 AM
Congrats Faye on your first place win! Lovely images. The last line is lovely!
Michaels Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 2:10 AM
Lovely imagery and sublime metaphors, Faye. Congratulations on your Top win! Regards, John.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 2:01 AM
Awesome write Faye, u hv a magical way with words ! Congrats on big win!
Onclaud Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 3:40 PM
an evening illuminating my senses... i was looking for pieces that developed fine imagery of all 3 senses, faye... sweet congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Such a lovely poem, Faye. Your imagery wakes up our senses in so many ways. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 2:27 AM
This poem is so creative Faye. I love the unique imagery expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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October 2, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Faye, Congrats on your "MIXED SENSES win" *****SKAT
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Congratulations on your win! Wonderful write!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 4:26 PM
wowowow. One of my faves in this contest. Sizzling!! BIG congrats for your win. The last part is spectacular.
Callus Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 4:18 PM
Hi Faye! You superbly succeed in attracting our senses through delightful imagery, where sounds play a major part. ~ Congratulations on your deserved win. // paul
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 3:35 PM
absolutely delightful Faye congrats on your win - I adore the final line especially:-) hugs Jan xx
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