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Old Tree

Old tree... Down at the middle of the vale Telling tales of an ancient people And their lore Around are hilly peaks Silent in the disquiet below And just a little while, The rain will come; Crawling and calling, Crashing... In torrents, Seeking all true natures disciples And paint the land in refreshing ink With morning dew and a green swathe Wild flowers don't bloom here But I see the green just as pink, Just as yellow and just as sweet Its just a little closer to heaven They will charge you a dollar For some water or Cola As they wait on you, in soft velvet collars And to behold such beauty Is not about profit No one ever pays to get to heaven Still... Old tree telling tales of an ancient time When lions roamed and roared And herdsmen trembled for their flock A time when there were no roads And heaven was full mosquitoes and disease Old tree..

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Date: 8/9/2024 4:28:00 AM
Yes I do remember lol, Kelli
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Marugu Mo
Date: 8/9/2024 7:07:00 AM
lol I might repost that one soon
Date: 8/6/2024 12:10:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to a sacred icon of longevity, well done Mr Mo
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Marugu Mo
Date: 8/9/2024 1:26:00 AM
Thanks Kelli. Remember that cannibal poem I wrote a while back?
Date: 8/1/2024 1:41:00 PM
I love the depth of this creatively woven poem flowing with such seamless alliterations and captivating imagery. I especially love “ Still... Old tree telling tales of an ancient time When lions roamed and roared And herdsmen trembled for their flock A time when there were no roads” the wordplay and what youv conveyed there is truly soulful! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Marugu Mo
Date: 8/2/2024 4:24:00 AM
Thanks Inky, much appreciated
Date: 7/25/2024 2:32:00 PM
Told through the eyes of an old tree. Sweet Mo
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Marugu Mo
Date: 7/26/2024 12:26:00 PM
Thanks Tom

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