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Old Songs replacing

Cycling along as usual, Along the road By the river bank In the countryside. Old songs of the birds., from the woods at the river banks Rarely heard today And some not heard again. Yet,new tunes heard, As fresh melodies unfurl From birds newly arrived.

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Date: 4/3/2025 12:20:00 PM
I really like this one. Write on! I really like this . Write on!
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 4/3/2025 7:32:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 4/3/2025 3:04:00 AM
- So beautiful to hear the birdsong in spring... lovely poem, Akham :) - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 4/3/2025 6:15:00 AM
Than you.
Date: 4/3/2025 2:48:00 AM
How beautiful and soothing is the way youv described and painted this ambience! I love the flow of your word weaving and also how youv written “ Old songs of the birds., Rarely hard today And some not heard again.” gives an evocative touch to your lines! Pleasure reading your poem today! Sending you light
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 4/3/2025 6:17:00 AM
Thanks for your beautiful comment .
Date: 4/3/2025 1:58:00 AM
Always a pleasure to hear fresh melodies from newly arrivals.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 4/3/2025 6:17:00 AM
Than you

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