Old Soldiers

He sits in a wheelchair pushed to the curb.  The people around him move aside to assure he is able to see.  His shrunken body  a shell of what it used to be.  His breathing labored, aided by the tube that extends from the oxygen tank attached to his chair.  On his head, he sports a blue campaign cap with VFW stitched in gold.  He is one of America's finest, come to pay his respects.

Behind him stands a younger woman who has guided him there.  A daughter perhaps, fussing over him, adjusting the robe in his lap, assuring his comfort.  He shows no resistance to the attention, but simply sits and waits.
  
In the distance drums are heard, soon to be joined by the sound of horns.  A stirring march riffles over the crowd, and an electricity grips their senses.  Soon the call of cadence is heard. The measured tramp of boots, perfectly in time with the music. It grows louder until at last, a military formation looms into view.  Uniformed soldiers, marching in perfect rows, perfect columns, gleaming boots, ribboned chests, weapons at rest on their shoulders.  The crowd stirs.  Small flags are waved.  Cheers erupt.  Pride hangs thick in the air.

The color guard approaches.  Banners held high, snapping in the breeze.  Some spectators remove their caps while others cover their hearts.  Children, hoisted to their fathers shoulders, clap in excitement.

The old man tugs at the woman's sleeve and motions for her to come closer.  She leans down and listens as he speaks, then asks "are you sure"?.  He nods his head.  Walking to the front of the chair, she removes the robe and, grasping his outstretched hands, pulls him slowly to his feet, where he stands with her assistance.  Those around him watch as the frail, stooped body, with some difficulty, stands more erect.  They see the pain etched on his face, and the tear that escapes his eye as he offers a salute as the flag passes by.

Suddenly, the cadence count stops, and in it's place is heard a command .  A command  normally reserved for when passing a reviewing stand.  "Company, eyes right" the guidon bearer bellows, and with that, he returns the aging veterans salute, a sign of respect for an old soldier.  After all, it is his flag.  It is his country.  He bought them both many years ago.


Bob Quigley
Jan 10, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/8/2012 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with a great narrative,Bob!
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Date: 2/8/2012 10:17:00 PM
Appreciate it Fabiyas
Date: 2/7/2012 7:26:00 PM
This was such a beautiful story, Bob. It brought tears to my eyes. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:46:00 PM
Thank you Kim. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 2/7/2012 2:32:00 PM
Well penned,Bob.Congratulations on your win....
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Date: 2/7/2012 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Olusegun
Date: 2/7/2012 1:45:00 PM
Bob - I usually don't like poem that don't have a clear rhyme scheme in them but I have to make an exception with this great piece you wrote. Mike
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Mike. Narratives are not everyone's idea of poetry so I will take that as a compliment.
Date: 2/7/2012 1:43:00 PM
congrats Bob on a remarkable win for this tremendous poetry luv.. fascinating lines penned..
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 1:22:00 PM
Thank you Carol for stopping by
Date: 2/7/2012 10:25:00 AM
Congrats, Bob. What an outstanding story. Great job, my friend. Beautifully told. Kudos. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:04:00 AM
Thank you Ralph
Date: 1/12/2012 11:47:00 PM
This was a great description of such an event where the veterans are honored. Did you serve, Bob? Very nice narrative.
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I did. I was in the Air Force
Date: 1/12/2012 9:38:00 PM
A vivid description of an event that takes place each Memorial Day or Veterans Day. Excellent write.
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Date: 1/12/2012 10:53:00 PM
Again, thanks
Date: 1/12/2012 2:31:00 PM
see the picture in me mind, grateful for this buggers kind, without him the old vet, to this man we owe a debt, freedom for mankind....
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Date: 1/12/2012 2:52:00 PM
right on mate
Date: 1/11/2012 5:27:00 AM
You've got this just right, loved it.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/11/2012 7:57:00 AM
Thanks Nick. Unfortunately, their ranks are thinning.
Date: 1/10/2012 11:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this afternoon Bob. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 1/10/2012 8:50:00 AM
such attention to poetic details and a glorious sense of story-telling, bob.. fantastic piece on a man of honor..:) huggs!
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Date: 1/10/2012 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Nette
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