Old Soldiers

He sits in a wheelchair pushed to the curb.  The people around him move aside to assure he is able to see.  His shrunken body  a shell of what it used to be.  His breathing labored, aided by the tube that extends from the oxygen tank attached to his chair.  On his head, he sports a blue campaign cap with VFW stitched in gold.  He is one of America's finest, come to pay his respects.

Behind him stands a younger woman who has guided him there.  A daughter perhaps, fussing over him, adjusting the robe in his lap, assuring his comfort.  He shows no resistance to the attention, but simply sits and waits.
  
In the distance drums are heard, soon to be joined by the sound of horns.  A stirring march riffles over the crowd, and an electricity grips their senses.  Soon the call of cadence is heard. The measured tramp of boots, perfectly in time with the music. It grows louder until at last, a military formation looms into view.  Uniformed soldiers, marching in perfect rows, perfect columns, gleaming boots, ribboned chests, weapons at rest on their shoulders.  The crowd stirs.  Small flags are waved.  Cheers erupt.  Pride hangs thick in the air.

The color guard approaches.  Banners held high, snapping in the breeze.  Some spectators remove their caps while others cover their hearts.  Children, hoisted to their fathers shoulders, clap in excitement.

The old man tugs at the woman's sleeve and motions for her to come closer.  She leans down and listens as he speaks, then asks "are you sure"?.  He nods his head.  Walking to the front of the chair, she removes the robe and, grasping his outstretched hands, pulls him slowly to his feet, where he stands with her assistance.  Those around him watch as the frail, stooped body, with some difficulty, stands more erect.  They see the pain etched on his face, and the tear that escapes his eye as he offers a salute as the flag passes by.

Suddenly, the cadence count stops, and in it's place is heard a command .  A command  normally reserved for when passing a reviewing stand.  "Company, eyes right" the guidon bearer bellows, and with that, he returns the aging veterans salute, a sign of respect for an old soldier.  After all, it is his flag.  It is his country.  He bought them both many years ago.


Bob Quigley
Jan 10, 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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M V Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your win with a great narrative,Bob!
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February 8, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Appreciate it Fabiyas
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February 7, 2012 at 7:26 PM
This was such a beautiful story, Bob. It brought tears to my eyes. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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February 7, 2012 at 10:46 PM
Thank you Kim. I'm glad you liked it.
Arowolo Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 2:32 PM
Well penned,Bob.Congratulations on your win....
Quigley Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Olusegun
Dailey Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Bob - I usually don't like poem that don't have a clear rhyme scheme in them but I have to make an exception with this great piece you wrote. Mike
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February 7, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Thanks Mike. Narratives are not everyone's idea of poetry so I will take that as a compliment.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:43 PM
congrats Bob on a remarkable win for this tremendous poetry luv.. fascinating lines penned..
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Congratulations to you on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Your Own Favorite Poem" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Carol for stopping by
Taylor Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Congrats, Bob. What an outstanding story. Great job, my friend. Beautifully told. Kudos. Best to you and yours. Ralph
Quigley Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 11:04 AM
Thank you Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 11:47 PM
This was a great description of such an event where the veterans are honored. Did you serve, Bob? Very nice narrative.
Quigley Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Thank you Andrea. I'm glad you liked it. Yes, I did. I was in the Air Force
Pettit Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 9:38 PM
A vivid description of an event that takes place each Memorial Day or Veterans Day. Excellent write.
Quigley Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 10:53 PM
Again, thanks
Johnson Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 2:31 PM
see the picture in me mind, grateful for this buggers kind, without him the old vet, to this man we owe a debt, freedom for mankind....
Quigley Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 2:52 PM
right on mate
Bagnall Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 5:27 AM
You've got this just right, loved it.
Quigley Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 7:57 AM
Thanks Nick. Unfortunately, their ranks are thinning.
Brown Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 11:23 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this afternoon Bob. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your writing in this new year of 2012. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 8:50 AM
such attention to poetic details and a glorious sense of story-telling, bob.. fantastic piece on a man of honor..:) huggs!
Quigley Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Thank you Nette
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