Old Sentimental Fool

sentimental
is how i get
thinking back 
how you
completed me,
my love



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Summers Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 11:05 PM
A beautiful addition to my favorite list Line. Thank you for sharing. John
Gauthier Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 7:08 AM
Thanks for the lovely compliment, John ~
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Line, this is the sweetest heartfelt poem I have read for a long time! "How you completed me" ..so poignant! Stay healthy, my dear friend. Love ~ Mala
Gauthier Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 9:03 PM
Thank yo so much, Mala. Most appreciated ~
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 2:15 PM
such emotion in your lines, I know you miss him so much my friend:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 9:03 PM
Thank you very much, Jan.
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:38 PM
- Love that never dies, Line :) - Many thanks for all my poems you have read today ... much appreciated:) - Have a lovely weekend, stay healthy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 9:03 PM
Thank you, Sunshine ~
Logan Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Sentimental, it surely is, but not the thought of a fool, old or of any age. Emotional write, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 9:04 PM
Thank you very much, Jenna ~
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