Old Rusty Metal Things

Dust devils harass the ground,
Sweeping up accessible layers of earth 
Stagnantly rooted in their stake 
Of vast uncaring land along train tracks in the desert.

The wind-born dirt
Whisks against calloused surfaces
Of metal things carelessly left
On the dry earth of the forgotten South Forty.    

A bucket, a barrel, 
A ‘40 Ford Coupe left to die of rust;
An armadillo on the edge of a highway. 

Flakes of faded iron skin litter the dust
Like dead leaves on the linoleum
Of a kitchen covered by sagging, burnt shingles.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fox Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 5:12 PM
What a cracking piece ! Dream poetry ! My bikes are in the shed just waitin !!
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January 31, 2015 at 3:50 PM
Very nice pen my dear friend! A 7 from me! Have a very nice weekend. Love and hugs! D. ^O^"
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