Old Red Barn

I stopped by the old red barn today...
I guess I was there about an hour.

What will they do with it after I'm gone?
It's been in the family for five generations...

Great Grampa's initials are carved in the door.
Once, Pappy fell from the loft and broke his arm.

It's where I watched Dad's mare
Give birth to my first pony.

And, it's where we told Mom and Dad
We'd decided to get married.

Such a stable part of my family's history,
Now, leans abstract against the autumn sky...

I think I'll go back tomorrow...
And take a few shots for the family album.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your win Ray in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 7:48 AM
Hello again Ray. I'm so glad to see this here in the winner's circle. I've missed reading your work on the soup, however, I hope your book has been successful. Your writing has always been close to my own roots, so it touches home for me! Happy Holidays and congratulations! ~ Carrie
Fraser Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:23 AM
You've penned a little GEM with this one Ray. Many congratulations on your win in Rick's contest >> James
Roberts Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 7:08 PM
wonderful memory penned, congrats on your win in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Ray, this is SO nice to read. I enjoyed it immensely and I love that line third from bottom, about the way the stable part of the barn leans abstract against the autum sky. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 9:31 AM
a very worthy presentation for your poem's honor Ray. Congratulations on a fine presentation. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Congrats Ray on your big win in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win my friend.. enjoy your top spot and sweet success .. also happy holidays to u and yours with much luv..
Mehta Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Ray
Horsman Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 11:20 PM
congrats on this winner Ray, this is a superb, Harry
Devonshire Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 11:18 PM
This barn holds special memories that belong in your family album, Ray. I hope you did go back for the photographs. Congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Great memories if this is fact and not imagination..Enjoyed reading ..Good luck in the contest if an entry..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
Burton Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Enjoyed this poetry tonight and have a great night
Richards Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Hello Ray....so nice to see you here....I'm glad I didn't miss this touching poem. Yes, what memories an old barn could hold...if only walls could talk. Thanks so much for letting me know about your book. How exciting...and indeed I will have to check on getting one!! Best wishes!! ~ Carrie
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:15 PM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Ray. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 8:28 PM
beautiful poem, great entry for the contest
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