OLD PEBBLES

Walking many pretty beaches, picking up pebbles like peaches.
The cool water licked my feet, as the sand went through my toes. Pebbles with a peach color, jar with old pebbles.
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Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 9:59 AM
I remember this one , peachy keen. Congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 7:39 AM
"4 Place" ~ "OLD PEBBLES" (Not A True Story)~ Date Written:10/3/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet..... ~~~ MAKE IT TWO, PLEASE Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
Sharma Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 2:00 AM
Congratulations. This feels so nostalgic :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 7:38 AM
Thank You for your wonderful support. Also "Thanks" for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "OLD PEBBLES" beach journey write to be, so nostalgic. This was fun to write. No sea here and that makes me sad. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
Miller Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 1:33 AM
Oh, so very nice, congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 7:36 AM
 Thank You for your wonderful support. Also "Thanks" for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "OLD PEBBLES" beach journey write to be, so very nice. This was fun to write. No sea here and that makes me sad. I would love to have some waves licking my feet and sand going through my toes. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
George Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 9:31 PM
I like the feel of waves licking the feet and sand going through the toes, while walking in a beach. Lovely, dear Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Thank You for your wonderful support. Glad you found my fun "OLD PEBBLES" beach journey write to be, Lovely. No sea here and that makes me sad. I would love to have some waves licking my feet and sand going through my toes. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 8:18 PM
So cute. Pebbles like peaches!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 10:50 AM
Thank You for your wonderful support. Glad you found my fun "OLD PEBBLES" beach journey write to be, So cute. I have been on two beaches with only pebbles, no seashells. It was hard to walk on. No sea here and that makes me sad. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
Jones Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 4:19 PM
What a nice beach write!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Thank You for your wonderful support. Glad you found my fun "OLD PEBBLES" to be, a nice beach write. No sea here and that makes me sad. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 5:10 PM
I, too, like to pick up shells along the beach. You captured those feelings and memories well....best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 11:40 AM
Thank You for your wonderful support. Also "Thanks" for you, best wishes with this contest entry. Glad you enjoyed my fun "OLD PEBBLES" beach write. Wish there was a beach close by so I could go picking up pretty shells. Guess I can dream. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
Anaya Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 3:27 PM
Best day ever described! Lovely beach scenes produced. Gl in contest. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Thank You for your wonderful support. Also "Thanks" for you, Gl in contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "OLD PEBBLES" beach write. No sea here and that makes me sad. I long for the beach and picking up pretty shells. Wish there was a beach close by. Guess I can only dream for now. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 2:18 PM
Interesting work. I like to pick up shells and things on the beach, but it has been years since I have been. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Thank You for your wonderful support. Glad you found my fun "OLD PEBBLES" beach write to be, Interesting work. No sea here and that makes me sad. I long for the beach and picking up pretty shells. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
Greenhough Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 1:05 PM
I enjoyed this journey to the beach. It's been a long time since I felt sea water on my feet.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Thank You for your wonderful support. Glad you enjoyed my fun "OLD PEBBLES" beach journey write. I have been on two beaches with only pebbles, no seashells. It was hard to walk on. No sea here and that makes me sad. I long for the beach. Keep the salt in the air and sand under your desk as you write away................
Goldsmith Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 11:29 AM
"OLD PEBBLES" (Not A True Story)~ Date Written:10/3/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet..... ~~~ MAKE IT TWO, PLEASE Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
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