Old Memories

Haze of deep evening

The blue light rests on my hands

Letters  getting old
  
On  sepia  of frail pages,

Love wakes in its fevered silence



Amy Green/ 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 10:30 PM
very nostalgic and well-scribed, rhoma.. sweet congrats on your award.. huggs
Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 2:16 PM
Beautiful images in your Tanka, Rhoma! Congratulations on your win! Best Wishes, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:13 PM
Nicely written. Congratulations. Love,, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 6:55 PM
this is the most gorgeous one of all. I can only think it did not get a higher placement because you did not do a nature poem!!! Congrats. this is so beautiful.
Mehta Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:25 AM
A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, Rhoma
A. Sharma Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 2:20 AM
Super write Rhoma ! Loved the poem , a well deserved win , congrats !
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April 27, 2014 at 1:51 AM
Rhoma,, awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA
Gorelick Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Very nice, Hope she likes it as much as I do. BG
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