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Old Man Winter {choka}

winters foliage
blankets trees and grassy knolls
water runs amidst

towering white pines
standing in complete solace
above canyon ridge

melting ice pellets
pumps from bleeding hearts vineyard 
sowing escalates





So Glad Winter Is Over   LOL


New Entry  For Raul Moreno's
Sounds Of Nature Contest

GL All

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/30/2009 6:48:00 AM

Dear Katherine, Excellent Entry Vivid Imagery Good Luck Blest POETESS How is Jenny Rose must be growing up LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS...HG

Date: 4/22/2009 1:04:00 PM

Nice use if imagery in this poem my friend. I'm glad winter is over too. It has been a challenging one. Karen

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/20/2009 4:55:00 PM

we are so past this thank God. john h loving iii

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/19/2009 8:07:00 AM

I thought I was glad winter is over, but your poem brings back the season's incredible beauty, along with the sounds and sights of the changing season. Each verse a winner, together just awesome Good luck! Love, Shar

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/19/2009 7:54:00 AM

This is a nice choka poem. I'm glad winter is over, too. Good luck in the contest. Love, Dane Ann