Old Man Tom

Tom with your fine plummage, strutting for the ladies.
Evoking fear in the children's heart, when you flap and threaten to spur.

Pawpaw evokes fear in your heart, when he sharpens the ax before Thanksgiving and 
Christmas.  You are too old and tough to be eaten, the young ones go to the table/slaughter.
Becoming juicy giblet gravy, basted, roasted, stuffed, succulent...Oh the poem!!...

Lunch break...

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November 25, 2009 at 10:51 AM
Excellent Light Poetry Doris, many congrats on your winning piece in Donna's contest >> James,x
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November 23, 2009 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Turkey Tribute Contest, Dores. Very creative. Love, lainie
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November 22, 2009 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations on your win in Donna's Turkey Tribute contest Doris. Love, Carol
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November 22, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Not only can you write, but you can draw an amazing image of a turkey, too! Congratulations on your success in Donna's contest. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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November 22, 2009 at 8:42 AM
Congrats on your success in Donna's contest Doris.Rgds Brian 7 thanks for your welcome comments today.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 6:55 PM
Congrats, Doris, on your winning poem in the turkey tribute contest... may your holiday be as wonderful as your winning poem.. blessings ... luv...
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November 21, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Doris, congratulations on your honorable mention in my Turkey Tribute Contest! Hugs, Donna
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November 2, 2009 at 6:47 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed and love the turkey..good luck in the contest...Marty
Richards Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 12:43 PM
What a great turkey. I tried doing a turkey on my poem page too....but I like your's much better !!!! Good luck in the contest!! ~ Love, Carrie
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October 29, 2009 at 6:58 PM
Hey, You stole my idea!!! LOL (Just kidding as I hope you were when you commented on my poem "Ode to a Turkey" Your poem is short, sweet, and cute, though!!! They say great minds think alike. Perhaps so. Smiles, Dane Ann (Soup Mail)
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October 29, 2009 at 6:37 PM
Poor old turkey or lucky old turkey. Cute. God Bless Phyl
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October 29, 2009 at 6:11 PM
Very expressive poem. I enjoyed reading it. Pam.
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