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Old Man In the Mirror Must Die

One early winter morning 
A man went to the mirror
To do his morning shave
Just another shave
Like a thousand, million shaves before

As he looked into the mirror
He did not see his face
Instead he saw a stranger
Staring out at him

An old, beat up old man
With intense sad eyes
Stared out at him

The man looked hard 
At the man who had taken 
Over his mirror

And wondered who he was
And how and why
He had taken over his mirror

The man was perturbed, disturbed
And a bit angry at the turn of events
All he wanted to do 
Was shave in peace and quiet

The man continued to stare 
At the face in the mirror
And finally could not stand it anymore

He looked at the mirror
And said,
Man in the mirror
Who or what are you 
And what do you want
And why have you taken over
My god damned mirror
So early in the morn

The old man 
Merely laughed and resumed staring
At the man
The man getting more and more angry
Demanded an answer 
From the fiend in the mirror

Who are you, you mocking fiend 
And what do you want from me
The man screamed

The old man in the mirror
Looked at him and said
Don't you know who I am
I am you and you are me

The man looked at the old man
And said no, no, no
I am not you,  never will be you
I am not an old, washed up old man
I am me – full of life, youth and vitality

And yet the man knew the truth
Did not want to admit the truth
Could not handle the truth
The old man in the mirror
Was what he had become

The man was very angry
And screamed
At the old man in the mirror

The man said you may look like me
You may sound like me
You may even smell like me

But I am not you
Never have been
Never will be
Not going to happen
Not in a million years

And the man stormed out of the house
And wandered about here and there
Finally late at night
He wandered into a bar 
And began drinking the night away

The next morning
He walked into the bathroom
Determined to confront the old man
Tell truth to power

He said, listen up, old man
You may have won the war
But not the battle
I am not you 
And never will be you

And screaming like an escaped banshee
Newly freed from the mental institution
The man shot the old man in the mirror
Shot him over and over
Screaming die mocking fiend from hell

The man woke in the hospital
And saw down the hall
The old man in the mirror
Smiling and beckoning to him
Walking out the window
And into the dawning sun

The man got up and walked 
And joined the old man in the mirror
And smiled as he died

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/14/2020 11:06:00 AM
I'm going out on a limb, jake, and suspect you're up in years as I am [mid-70's-gulp!] I wrote a poem somewhat along these lines as well --'The Old Man In The Mirror'. I like the last line a lot.
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Jake Aller
Date: 3/14/2020 9:05:00 PM
yep I am 64 turning 65 in October and happily retired living half the year in Korea

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