Old Man

Sitting in a rocking chair
Staring out the window
The old man thinks quietly
Of all the people he used to know

He waits for someone that will see
And want to know his history
Cause from his window, the old man stares
For someone who knows him, and might even care

He thinks of the day when he will die
A few people will show, but no one will cry
People wonder who the old man is
But no one knows of the life he lives

He imagines all the things he would like to do
If he had a normal life like me and you
But every day he stays at home
Tired, weak and all alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Steph, your poem speaks the truth. Have a nice evening my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 11:39 AM
A truly beautiful poem of empathy. Love it. Well done, Steph.
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 8:26 PM
This is so sad and so true for the elderly. I hope I don't turn into this kind of old person. I hope I can realize anyone living nearby me that needs a visit!!
One Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Great first post Steph, I wrote a poem called old man recently.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Gibeault Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Thanks, appreciate the feed back!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 6:03 PM
A sad life where all those you know have gone ahead and life is but a feeble task. Well written!!
Gibeault Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I'll be posting more soon. I'm more of a singer/songwriter. I'll post those as well...they come with the chords in case anyone wants to attempt on guitar.
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