Deb Wilson Poet Tanka

Old Lovers

wrinkled weathered face
gnarled hands i grasp with love
you are my sweet dream
in this world and yet the next
throughout time i'll walk with you






for contest"We Aren't Japanese BUT Please!"
sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

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Dr.Ram Mehta February 25, 2011 at 6:13 PM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of debbie, Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown February 25, 2011 at 10:01 AM Congratulations on your win Deb, in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick February 24, 2011 at 5:04 PM Made me tear up...now that speaks for real love. congrats on your win. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 24, 2011 at 7:07 AM Congrats Deb on your great big win in the Japanese contest luv.. a super cool write ..enjoy with luv..

Nette Onclaud February 24, 2011 at 12:49 AM lovely work that really deserves a big win, deb.. happy cheers to you.:) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2011 at 9:52 PM a tender tanka, Deb. Big congrats to you!

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 23, 2011 at 9:16 PM Many congrats Deb on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Tahera Mannan February 23, 2011 at 8:03 PM Beautiful love. many congrats.

Debbie Guzzi February 23, 2011 at 1:30 PM such tenderness...a fine write..proud to have you up there with the winners Light & Love and Congrad's

Kash Poet February 23, 2011 at 10:49 AM Congrats Deb on your well deserved win in the contest with this beautiful entry---kashinath