Old Jake

A wind slowly caresses the ridge line.
Southern pine cones rock in the tree.
A local whippoorwill is keeping time.
The old cricket: He chirps a bit off key 

The cabin: time weathered and worn;
old Jake: his singing is in the same boat.   
He sings, nonetheless, all rusty, forlorn 
like a patched tire tube only half afloat.

Nice: the small acts giving us pleasure.
I guess, caused from one’s vision of life.
While old Jake is no college professor:
His totem, the red bird, guides his life. 

in the plot of life we all have our place
sanctioned by gifts of nature and grace

This is for my friend Joe, who died
this week.  I am sure he’s somewhere in 
time laughing and secretly longing to 
respond.  Joe was a college professor, a 
Christian,  a good man, father, and friend.

Sunday Jan 17, 201
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 9:08 AM
I am adding this beautiful sonnet tribute to my fav list here. Sorry for your loss. Old age is not for the timid methinks, because we see and FEEL THE PAIN OF, so many of our friends passing on..
Laurie Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 6:28 PM
G'day Charles ... a beaut sonnet and a lovely tribute - Lindsay
Gorelick Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 4:02 PM
I'll bet Joe would have loved your poem.. I'm sorry for your loss. BG
Henderson Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 6:12 PM
Thank you Barbara.
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