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Old House

Old House


Top of the hill's day
Little old house kisses sun's rays
Peak of the mountain puzzles

Opens window by two hands
Dances the dust shinning vibrant
Lady's broom plays pleasant

Cool wind shakes some leaves
Enters, provides, breathe of heaven
For life of house hillock.

good morninglifemountainshaiku

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Sandra Haight

May 24, 2016 at 8:28 PM

Nicely written, and enchanting imagery of the 'old house' Deepak. Congratulations on your nice win in the contest. Sandra

Deepak Chalise

May 25, 2016 at 8:04 AM

Thank you very much, Sandra for kind words.

Eve Roper

May 23, 2016 at 10:39 PM

Deepak, great haiku entry congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Deepak Chalise

May 24, 2016 at 7:52 AM

Thank you very much for love,Eve.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

May 23, 2016 at 7:43 PM

Congratulations Deepak on the placement of the contest

Deepak Chalise

May 24, 2016 at 7:54 AM

Thank you very much for your support on my poem,Nyada

Sara Kendrick

May 11, 2016 at 4:45 PM

Dust dancing in the sunlight and breeze two good visions..Thanks for the visit to my page..I enjoyed reading your work..Sara

Deepak Chalise

May 11, 2016 at 5:13 PM

Thank you very much, Sara. The poem is composed a small hut at the top of the hill. Nepal is the mountainous country. She has thousands of peaks in hills and the first ray of the sun peeps in the morning ,scattering wonderful warm yellowish power, and blow of breeze provides spirit, and strength for the life.