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In deep specks, the sea flashlight sways. sapphire flecks, and azure splashing. Screes’ speckled satins. Sadness fluid in the bowed beldam. sprinkle its stretch into the shards as her wings curled in dismay. She had morphed into a mountainous waterfall. a stratum full of opal swords clasped her down. similar to a thumbprint Gloved and cloaked in a conundrum While roaming, she spoke a light of transforming stone into a mist
Written: November 27, 2022

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Date: 11/28/2022 8:56:00 PM
"She had morphed into a mountainous waterfall. a stratum full of opal swords clasped her down. similar to a thumbprint"...... What cutting and incisive images! Your poetry leaves me awestruck !
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Date: 11/28/2022 12:04:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem, Lasaad! Just full of beautiful words ~screes' speckled satin, opal swords, transforming stones into a mist~ beautiful writing.
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Date: 11/28/2022 7:58:00 AM
Picture is resonating with your beautiful Composition. Sapphire flecks, azure flashing… Sadness fluid in the bowed beldam… Excellent
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Date: 11/27/2022 12:08:00 PM
An enormous painting of beauty created by your inspiring pen, my friend, Lasaad. Be blessed.
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Date: 11/27/2022 11:36:00 AM
And what mists her, she mists.. eventually. And the meaning I might have missed ;) cloaked in scintillating imagery. Always worth the read, SP.
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Date: 11/27/2022 10:21:00 AM
so much beautiful imagery here. Well done.
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