Old Granny Had a Wish

Old granny had a funny wish, 
To go back to her teens;

She had always been yearning
To travel back to her youth;

For nobody admires her figure now, 
And says to her 'you are pretty';

Whenever she sees young charming girls, 
She could not help but envy them and think:

'If only I could get back, 
Atleast for one day to my eighteen.. '. 

Then this craving started to occupy, 
All the corners of her brain;

Until one fine day, at night, 
It all popped up as a dream;

As her eyes succumbed to slumber gracefully, 
She believed she saw something she disbelieved:

She was standing in front of a mirror and
In it, old granny saw her own young  teen! 

Wrinkled hands here, smooth hands there;
Saggy skin here, appeared to be taut skin there;
Weary face here, fresh face there;
Imperfections here, seemed perfect there. 

Granny's happiness knew no bounds, 
That she jumped and danced in joy in dream, 
And thanked God for answering her prayers! 

As she relished for some time, 
In this illusory delightful bliss, 
She woke up with a start from the sleep, 
Only to see her own self
Lying in the bed: old and weak... 


Dated: 11/19/2020
Submitted for: Juxtaposition Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

Second Place
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Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 10:24 AM
oh my, how awful to wake up from THAT dream. Worse than waking from a nightmare, because you just realize again how changed things are. I see you won this contest but it was a while back so I don't know what placement you got. Anyway, belated Congrats, dear friend.
Wolf Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Great juxtaposition... but poor ole Granny! Don't laugh too hard, but this kind of stuff happens to me a lot: I'm young and athletic in my dreams; then I wake up and I can barely walk down the stairs in the morning, as I hobble into the kitchen,... cup of coffee to the rescue. Here's to the bloom of youth! :) gw
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 10:59 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Juxtaposition contest, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jayasankar Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:40 PM
Thank you so much dear Anne. Congrats to you too on your great win. Hugs :)
Mitra Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 9:59 PM
Aah to go back in time...but only for being and feeling young once again....Congrats on your win Anitha :))
Jayasankar Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 2:21 AM
Yes.. an old granny's perspective.. thx for the visit and comment Carol. Have a great day :)
Y. Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Hi Anitha, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Jayasankar Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 2:17 AM
Thank you so much Alexis. You too have a great day :)
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 7:12 AM
Good idea for the contest, I think many old people may feel like this sometimes.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Jayasankar Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:16 AM
SO thank you so much!!.... just this idea came to me... and I had heard one old granny saying so in reality (not my own)... and I thought would use the idea. Have a great evening. :)
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Eerily familiar for me, as I often dream of my youth, and then wake up so incredibly stiff every morning... All I can do is smile... Eventually I loosen up. My sympathies are entirely with Granny! :) gw
Jayasankar Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 8:13 AM
Is it? Yes.. maybe... as I get old... I may come to know... You have a strong young mind.. that is enough. Thank you for the visit and comment Gershon. Best regards. Have a blessed great day. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 3:35 AM
Great tribute to your grandma. Good luck with the contest. ~~
Jayasankar Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Thank you so much for the visit and comment Victor. Have a great day :)
Dome Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 12:51 AM
Bless her. what a great story poem.Excellent visuals. Hope you won. Love this.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 2:24 AM
Thank you so much Peter. Much appreciated.. Have a great day :)
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