Old Goat

There was a little Nubian;
The kids just called her Split.
Banana was her mama, and
She looked like her a bit.

One day Split caught a nasty bug,
A mean old parasite.
It nearly took the poor girl out;
few thought she’d make the night.

But Miss Split caught a break that day,
Some say she caught one good;
An old goat came and took her in
And did the best he could. 

It took a while, but she came ‘round,
Could stand all on her own.
You’d never know that she’d been sick
With all the progress shown.

The kids were glad to see their pet
And raised a joyful shout!
The only problem was one leg;
It wouldn’t straighten out.

So GV took to feeding her
To help that leg get straight,
And even though she hobbles some,
She’s really doing great.

That old goat drops by here and there,
Checks in from time to time;
Miss Split comes running out to him
And says she’s doing fine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 10/21/2022 11:49:00 AM
Jeff... I like the feeling of hopefulness and helpfulness in this poem, but, maybe I missed it, who is GV? This poem almost has the tone of one of the Strega stories my Mum used to tell me, and I know some different people in various parts of Africa that I'm sure would say the same. Whether which god or shaman; witch or priest the power is that of love and wellbeing; or am I reading too much into this? It definitely left me with a good feeling. Thanks for that Jeff...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 10/21/2022 7:16:00 PM
Fantastic!!! Truly wonderful Jeff. A blessed poem indeed.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/21/2022 11:56:00 AM
Kudos to you for reading all these! So GV is Genevieve, my granddaughter. I'm the old goat who took Split in and nursed her from death's door until GV could take care of her again. Hard/rewarding for both of us. Split is alive and kicking, and it makes me very happy to see her, and she still comes to me at the fence when I call.
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