Old Glory

Old Glory flapping in the wind, waving with pride. Stripes of red and white, fifty stars blaze bright, flying free. 6/9/12

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Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/17/2012 7:39:00 AM

I like your ninette and the theme. Will read more of your poems on vacation.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/26/2012 7:29:00 AM

I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Kim. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/12/2012 11:15:00 PM

Praise be to our God who allots us this freedom..Nice ninette. :) Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2012 12:25:00 AM

This is really neat -o kiddo!!! I like it a lot.

The Situation

Date: 6/9/2012 7:43:00 PM

it's hard to discribe the love for our country. but you have done it so well, here. there is no jealousy though there could be betrayal. but the ideal. a free country and we were born here. let those stars and stripes wave forever and a day.