Old Girlfriends

girlfriends
just frozen memories
where belong
still fish in the meadow pond
just sit casting a bare hook
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Spagnola Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 4:48 PM
Sweet Tanka, though I note from your writings that your hook is far from bare...:), jill
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 2:08 PM
- Good luck :)))) - Great written, Thomas - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Thomas, I feel your pain. "fish" as in POF? I also seem to be missing a wiggly worm.
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