Old Friend

Nearly fifty years ago 
His life came to its end
And I lost a much loved 
And respected old friend.

Born cruelly disabled,
Paralysed by surgical knife,
A calculated risk in the hope
Of a more normal life.
Enjoy your life 
The surgeon had said,
It won’t be for long,
And you’re a long time dead.

A bon viveur and raconteur 
He spun many a fine tale 
Enthroned in his wheel chair
Clasping his pint of real ale.
At first on foot, taxi or train 
Latterly in the car of the day
We wandered and forged
Our merrily desperate way.
 
A sudden blink of fate 
And Old Hawkins was gone
Still only in his thirties
As time, uncaring,  moved on.
I cried at his funeral.
His loss twisting like a knife,
Celebrating the memory of
His short but well lived life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Volumes Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 12:53 AM
He wont need his wheelchair in heaven. His spirit may be more free now than it ever was on earth. Its the ones left behind that mourn. A beautiful poem dear Terry.
Ireland Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Still missed Wen. Can't believe the stunts we got up to
M  Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Oh Terry how very sad and unfair. …beautiful and really heartfelt words about your friend and your memories of him! Just lovely….Debx
Ireland Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 4:44 AM
Thanks Deb - he never told us what the doctor soid, so we didn't know until after died. Great man by any standards.
Meadows Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 4:59 AM
A lovely tribute to your friend. Well done.
Ireland Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Thanks Jeanette
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