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Old Friend

Nearly fifty years ago His life came to its end And I lost a much loved And respected old friend. Born cruelly disabled, Paralysed by surgical knife, A calculated risk in the hope Of a more normal life. Enjoy your life The surgeon had said, It won’t be for long, And you’re a long time dead. A bon viveur and raconteur He spun many a fine tale Enthroned in his wheel chair Clasping his pint of real ale. At first on foot, taxi or train Latterly in the car of the day We wandered and forged Our merrily desperate way. A sudden blink of fate And Old Hawkins was gone Still only in his thirties As time, uncaring, moved on. I cried at his funeral. His loss twisting like a knife, Celebrating the memory of His short but well lived life.

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Date: 11/17/2023 12:53:00 AM
He wont need his wheelchair in heaven. His spirit may be more free now than it ever was on earth. Its the ones left behind that mourn. A beautiful poem dear Terry.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 11/17/2023 8:33:00 AM
Still missed Wen. Can't believe the stunts we got up to
Date: 8/1/2023 7:28:00 AM
Oh Terry how very sad and unfair. …beautiful and really heartfelt words about your friend and your memories of him! Just lovely….Debx
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Terry Ireland
Date: 8/4/2023 4:44:00 AM
Thanks Deb - he never told us what the doctor soid, so we didn't know until after died. Great man by any standards.
Date: 8/1/2023 5:36:00 AM
This is an awesome but sad tribute. I'm sure you have many nice memories
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Terry Ireland
Date: 8/4/2023 4:42:00 AM
Thanks Tom - yes many memories. By coincidence his great niece lives next door now, and facially sphere is very like him.
Date: 8/1/2023 4:59:00 AM
A lovely tribute to your friend. Well done.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 8/4/2023 4:41:00 AM
Thanks Jeanette

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