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old fallen branches piled beneath the forest tree ~ a rabbit peeks out 4/19/21 Contest: One Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier (5 7 5 syllable counts checked on PS)

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Date: 4/22/2021 5:51:00 PM
dropping back with many congrats Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/23/2021 3:00:00 AM
Thank you Jan! hugs
Date: 4/22/2021 10:29:00 AM
That is such a lovely, cute picture which you offer, Tania. I can see it forming part of a Disney cartoon :) ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/22/2021 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Paul!
Date: 4/22/2021 9:02:00 AM
Great imagery, Tania, congratulations on your win!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/22/2021 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 4/21/2021 8:19:00 PM
What a sweet haiku. I can just see that sweet little bunny peeking. Congrats on your fine win, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/22/2021 3:15:00 PM
Thank you Carol!
Date: 4/21/2021 4:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win. My wife who is very much into leaving deadwood be would heartily approve.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/22/2021 3:15:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/20/2021 7:00:00 PM
Very nice, I can see the rabbit and really sounds like a perfect Haiku
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/20/2021 7:22:00 PM
Thank you Linda!
Date: 4/19/2021 4:57:00 PM
Sweet imagery!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/20/2021 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Kim!
Date: 4/19/2021 11:29:00 AM
Won by an hare? Aloha! Rico
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:32:00 AM
Ha ha, thanks for your visit Rico!
Date: 4/19/2021 10:22:00 AM
what a lovely imagery, the final line is so cute:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Jan, hugs!
Date: 4/19/2021 10:15:00 AM
This is a sweet haiku, Tania, straight from nature. I loved it, and I wish you the very best in the contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:28:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/19/2021 9:45:00 AM
Perfect nature image Tania. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Tom!
Date: 4/19/2021 9:36:00 AM
This is cute Tania, very cute. Best for a win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Victor, hugs!