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Old Fallen

old fallen branches piled beneath the forest tree ~ a rabbit peeks out 4/19/21 Contest: One Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier (5 7 5 syllable counts checked on PS)

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Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2021 5:51:00 PM
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dropping back with many congrats Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/23/2021 3:00:00 AM
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Thank you Jan! hugs
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/22/2021 10:29:00 AM
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That is such a lovely, cute picture which you offer, Tania. I can see it forming part of a Disney cartoon :) ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/22/2021 3:14:00 PM
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Thank you Paul!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/22/2021 9:02:00 AM
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Great imagery, Tania, congratulations on your win!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/22/2021 3:14:00 PM
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Thank you Eve!
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 4/21/2021 8:19:00 PM
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What a sweet haiku. I can just see that sweet little bunny peeking. Congrats on your fine win, Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/22/2021 3:15:00 PM
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Thank you Carol!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/21/2021 4:58:00 PM
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Congrats on your win. My wife who is very much into leaving deadwood be would heartily approve.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/22/2021 3:15:00 PM
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Thank you!
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Linda Milgate
Date: 4/20/2021 7:00:00 PM
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Very nice, I can see the rabbit and really sounds like a perfect Haiku
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/20/2021 7:22:00 PM
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Thank you Linda!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2021 4:57:00 PM
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Sweet imagery!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/20/2021 1:51:00 PM
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Thank you Kim!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/19/2021 11:29:00 AM
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Won by an hare? Aloha! Rico
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:32:00 AM
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Ha ha, thanks for your visit Rico!
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2021 10:22:00 AM
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what a lovely imagery, the final line is so cute:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:27:00 AM
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Thank you Jan, hugs!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/19/2021 10:15:00 AM
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This is a sweet haiku, Tania, straight from nature. I loved it, and I wish you the very best in the contest.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:28:00 AM
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Thank you!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/19/2021 9:45:00 AM
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Perfect nature image Tania. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:28:00 AM
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Thank you Tom!
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 4/19/2021 9:36:00 AM
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This is cute Tania, very cute. Best for a win.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 4/19/2021 11:29:00 AM
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Thank you Victor, hugs!

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