Premiere Contest WinnerOld Church

I've watched the isles at dusk
Cool and mysterious they lie--
Where old and deep-boughed cedars
heave, as gleaned from a cloudscape 
on earth's threadbare attic,
While lines of faded stars 
slip into gauzy white--
to appear like brushed, eerie ghosts
on howling psalms that sought 
the need to settle in the vault 
of an empty, ruined church.


 Brian's Select 4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Gorgeous piece Gabby, a winner indeed :) xomo!
May Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Great write and win...Congrats
Capitano Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 3:56 AM
Well done Gabby, congrats on your win.
Godwin Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Very nice poem, Gabby! It's like being a fly on the wall in an empty and abandoned church - you described it so vividly and interwove it with feeling. Congratulations on your first place win ... CayCay
Fleming Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 11:47 AM
I like this...but for me it has a comforting feel to it not a sinister one. Nicely done, Gabby. My warmest regards...And a merry Christmas! :) john
Green Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 2:48 PM
very cool, this had a dark and sinister feel though it was beautifully enchanting. Nicely done.
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