Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Old But I Sure Ain'T Dead

I'm old but I sure ain't dead
Still got a eye for the ladies
Guess some of us older dudes
Will never give in to aging

It definitely is the reason
Passing a sweet young filly
I gush and stutter and stammer
Grinning and acting so silly

It's what us guys were meant to do
Hope it's not too overbearing
Why do girlies dress as they do
Such skimpy stuff they're wearing

Must be meant to attract us guys
To add some zest to our libidos
I'll let you in on a little secret
I tremble right down to my toes

So keep on keeping on, sweet ladies
Our panting will give you a clue
Your message is surely affecting us
Our minds are totally askew

© Jack Ellison 2013

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Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2013 at 12:17 AM yep, the ladies know JUST what they are doing. This is a great fun poem and it just shows you are a natural guy! Jack Ellison September 24, 2013 at 4:59 AM Yep! That's me...a lover of nature! LOL Oh and the ladies too... yum! Hugs my dear Andrea xoxoxoxox

Eileen Manassian September 23, 2013 at 11:23 AM Hey, Kenny...Just because you're on a diet, doesn't mean you can't check out the menu...IF you get my drift. A marriage counselor once shared this with a group....Imagine...As to the debate between skimpy and tight..I say...whatever works for you! HA HA! Be good, Kenny! ;) Jack Ellison September 23, 2013 at 2:42 PM Love it!!! So I think Drake and I are on two different tracks but heading in the same direction... and THAT works for both of us!!! LOL Love ya, sweet lady! Kenny saying ta-ta for now! xoxox

Nette Onclaud September 23, 2013 at 10:40 AM jack, age is all in the mind.. go and conquer the world; it's all yours.. what a lively piece!.. huggles :) Jack Ellison September 23, 2013 at 10:50 AM "huggles" LOL That's one of my favourites! Huggles back to you dear Nette! xoxoxoxox

Demetrios Trifiatis September 23, 2013 at 9:32 AM My dear friend, Jack, God bless the ladies, the flowers of this world that make our hearts reverberate and keep us young enough to run after! God bless you too for writing this magnificent piece of poetry that so eloquently expresses reality in all its aspects. Someone understands reality in the degree he has lived it and you and I are old enough to say: I REALLY UNDERSTAND! Jack Ellison September 23, 2013 at 9:42 AM You write so eloquently my dear good friend! Seems we both still appreciate real beauty! I echo your words. "God bless the ladies"!!!

Poet Tacito September 23, 2013 at 8:33 AM Be sure to change "ageing" to "aging". :) I'm still very young (to me, you're only REALLY old when the government cancels your health care coverage), but I totally relate to this. Yeah, say no to skimpy stuff. Tight stuff, YES! =D Thanks for this, Jack! Jack Ellison September 23, 2013 at 8:38 AM Thanks for catching that, my man! Love skimpy, tight stuff, not particular! LOL Cheers my friend... hope today's filled with good stuff! Yee haw!

Carol Eastman September 23, 2013 at 7:59 AM Grandpa Troll says Dragons look for the most beautiful eyes, to be attracted. That explains a lot... and I do mean a LOT of eye candy and make up... LOL... And it's the girls that chase the boys... Bet you guys would like that one... LOL... When Dragon heard that one he said the girl Dragons would be lining up any day now... I told him he's still too young and still has his pretty pink... baby colors... He didn't like being called a baby... Sigh! ... Her we go again... and we're off... Chuckle! Jack Ellison September 23, 2013 at 8:04 AM Old dear sweet faithful Carol,,, you never miss! If a day ever goes by without hearing from you, I'll alert the National Guard! Love ya bunches, dear lady! xoxoxox