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Old Bob

OLD BOB Tell ya bout old Bob Long bout O-One he lost his job Twernt much ova job I fear Hadn’t been fer many a year Standin out front a this here super store Welcoming folk in kind of a real dang bore Best thing though bout old smiling Bob Didn’t mind goin ta work Kinda liked his job Standin out front through weather foul or fair Helping even the infirm with lovin care Ya might say that there super store was Bob’s true home Cause after hours Bob sat and sat quite alone Sat in this one-room pad above a whiskey dive Listenin ta noise all night all kindsa rock and jive And as nature will Bob got much older then ill Standin in front a that there store weak-kneed full a pain One day old Bob collapsed couldn’t come back again He lay on his back atop that whiskey dive Nary a soul knew old Bob was alive Ya’d think after years front a that super mart never glum He’d a wandered round inside found him a chum “If some help had come he’d have survived” Doc said This a course too late when they found old Bob dead Well these things happen in this runaway world Everybody caught up in their own little whirl Old Bob it seems uz jist one of the thousands come to a sorry end Done his best made mistakes society don’t bend Old Bob died fer want of a friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/14/2015 1:48:00 PM
Very true Daver..'
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Date: 5/23/2012 11:31:00 PM
You hit this nail of a selfcertered society square on it's head. Wonderful write and wonderful story telling. Keep up the good work. TLee
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Date: 2/3/2012 8:16:00 AM
HI Daver, I see from below that this is a true story. It hurts to realize that it happens all too often through no fault of their own and the other end of the spectrum where those who have so much they don't even have feelings for the unfortunate. You certainly painted a sad picture of one person in need. :( soup mail
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Daver Austin
Date: 2/4/2012 11:36:00 AM
I was a depression baby, Liz - saw all kinds of stuff. daver
Date: 2/2/2012 9:40:00 PM
this is a sad one and so true of how things are these days. Was there really an old Bob that you read of in the paper or something? Well, it really could be any poor guy on any day of the week that is dying needlessly. Hey are you gonna post the jingle poem from PFT here?
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Date: 2/2/2012 9:33:00 PM
Hello.. Daver... this is a very interesting story... sad to say... about society... had fun reading... except what one has to go through... have yourself a lovely..night..pd
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Date: 2/2/2012 6:23:00 PM
Hello This is such a write, where I felt enjoyment reading in a form of slang but I also felt compassion for dear old bob, who reminds me of my dad. I think it's not hard to feel for the fellow as you wrote of his positive qualities and strengths, then laid out his loneliness. I also think the fact he was in a superstore increased the vision of solitude due to the size of some of those places. Thank you for an enjoyable read to ponder on.
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Date: 2/2/2012 1:39:00 PM
Well dear poet; you have touched a nerve. I have seen this happen to souls before, whether the C*** S*****'s snag the loot from the disabled, elderly, widow, child; they care not<--in regards your comment to Robert. And then there is the light side of this story of yours Dave.....If'n I ev'r fine ah wino laid dead, I pray an empty pint be; fist to head ! Have a great week fine fellow...much love, james
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Date: 2/2/2012 11:54:00 AM
great write about ole Bob. Superb reality tribute to an awesome human being that many could not or do not recognize as such. Many come to expect what such smiling gracious people have to offer which is the opening of their coffers to society and giving all they have. God bless old Bob. I have learned much from those friends and much more to learn. Thanks Daver... beautiful write and the lingo went right along. You know I like that!
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Daver Austin
Date: 2/2/2012 12:41:00 PM
My Brother, Bill, lived for a while above a liquor store in downtown Littleton CO. Next door to his cubicle lived a cripple who, against his wishes, had visitors who helped him spend his social security check. Sick!
Date: 2/2/2012 10:15:00 AM
This is so tragic. What's even more tragic is that it happens over and over again. Well written, Daver. Love, Kim
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