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Old Blooms Will Slowly Fade - For Contest

Old Blooms Will Slowly Fade


Old blooms will slowly fade but never die
at the edge of darkness’s waning light
for love will warm them always with its sigh
deny the stinging truth of flowered lie
caress them in memoried folds of night.
Old blooms will slowly fade but never die
resurrected in hearts that still defy
sad coldness of the moment they felt blight
for love will warm them always with its sigh
exhale the passioned tears lovers can’t cry
breathe into them the thrill of scents first sight.
Old blooms will slowly fade but never die
hearts echoing prayers without reply
bask in love’s distant dreams of wingless flight 
for love will warm them always with its sigh
color again loves cheeks in blushing shy
slow trace once more the face of blooms delight.
Old blooms will slowly fade but never die
for love will warm them always with its sigh.


6/9/2016

submitted to – Villanelle Me A Flower or Flowers – Poetry contest
sponsor – Broken Wings

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Date: 7/6/2016 4:44:00 PM
Great carry through line..Wonderful win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/1/2016 6:41:00 PM
Nice write!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/1/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Tom.
Date: 6/30/2016 8:21:00 PM
John, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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John Lawless
Date: 7/1/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thanks Laura, sometimes "old blooms" are the most beautiful.
Date: 6/11/2016 7:00:00 PM
So beautiful, John. I am glad to see you are a sentimental poet!! What a great way to do her challenge.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/11/2016 9:13:00 PM
Well, Andrea, the muse is a multi-faceted little rascal capable of taking me to new and awakening places.
Date: 6/11/2016 8:49:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..I enjoyed reading this one today..I get a deeper meaning within the lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sorry so long in replying and reading one of your works..Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 6/11/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thanks Sara, nice to hear from you. Appreciate your kind words, glad you enjoyed this poem.
Date: 6/11/2016 1:15:00 AM
Beautiful, John ... CayCay
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John Lawless
Date: 6/11/2016 6:33:00 AM
Thanks CayCay.
Date: 6/10/2016 12:33:00 PM
I love it wonderful!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/11/2016 6:32:00 AM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment James
Date: 6/10/2016 9:28:00 AM
Beautifully penned John - it is quite a challenge ... I have only tried this form once before :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 6/11/2016 6:32:00 AM
Good luck with writing your villanelle. They are IMHO extremely complex and difficult. Combining the limited rhyme, and the uneven rhyme scheme as you blend the repeating lines into a smooth poetic flow.....OOPs....this is not a really good pep talk.... JUST GO WRITE A WICKED PISSA POEM...

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