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Old Billy Premiere Contest Winner

OLD BILLY

There once was an old shark named Billy
Billy was considered quite silly
Ate anything in sight
Until one fateful night
He saw a mermaid oh so frilly

And decided to eat  mermaid stew
Washed down with a great saltwater brew
But he let out a groan
She was made out of stone
Now old Billy can no longer chew

4 August 2019
For the contest sponsored by Tania Kitchen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 5/21/2020 6:11:00 PM
Hello Curtis Moorman, oh poor Billy. Enjoy your evening.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 1:10:00 PM
Enjoy your day.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 5/21/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene! Good t hear from you!
Date: 8/11/2019 5:54:00 PM
oh boy- silly Billy! Congrats on your well deserved win! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/11/2019 7:28:00 AM
Poor Billy! Congratulations on top win, Curtis!
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Date: 8/10/2019 9:20:00 AM
Ha ha, a clever one.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/10/2019 10:47:00 AM
Thanks, Richard! I was pleasantly surprised to receive the trophy win --- my first!
Date: 8/8/2019 6:56:00 PM
wow, way to go, Curtis. Top place. Congratulations.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/8/2019 7:58:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! It's been a long time in coming! See the limerick I wrote entitled Lady Souper's Limericks
Date: 8/8/2019 2:30:00 AM
Fab limerick love it! Great Job!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/8/2019 3:16:00 AM
Thanks, Timothy. Glad you enjoyed it! Glad to share the winner's circle with you and Bob Hinshaw.
Date: 8/8/2019 1:56:00 AM
Big congrats Curtis on your top win. Tom
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/8/2019 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Tom! I finally got a win over my Air Force compadre, Bob Hinshaw. What a great honor!
Date: 8/7/2019 10:48:00 PM
LOL, saw the title and had to see if it was about Billy Baroo. Congrats on your win.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 8/8/2019 10:06:00 PM
Billy Baroo was a special putter in the movie 'Caddyshack'. They have clips of the scene on Youtube. That is neat that you had a teacher with my name, this is the first I have seen or heard of someone with my name.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/8/2019 7:15:00 AM
Rob, thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your support. I'm not familiar with Billy Baroo, but by coincidence, I had a school teacher whose name was Robbie Carmack. She was one of our favorites. I'm from Dublin, Georgia and I graduated in 1963. Mrs. Carmack was in her mid 50's at that time. Just thought I'd share that with you since your name is Rob. Thanks again for your support.
Date: 8/7/2019 8:01:00 PM
this is so cute and flows with the beat. Congratulations on the top win.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/7/2019 9:09:00 PM
Thanks, Jeanne! It's good to hear from you. I appreciate your support.
Date: 8/7/2019 7:34:00 PM
Bravo, Curtis. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/7/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thanks, Line! This is a first for me and I am flabbergasted!
Date: 8/7/2019 6:19:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your trophy win, very well done Curtis!:-) hugs jan xx
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/7/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! What a great surprise, and an honor as well.
Date: 8/7/2019 5:50:00 PM
Curtis congratulations on your first place trophy win. I loved your limerick, it is both clever and funny. I laugh every time I read it!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/7/2019 9:07:00 PM
Tania, I can't begin to thank you enough for selecting my poem as a first place trophy win. I have a few first place regular contest wins but getting this win with the new contest rules is a great honor. Thanks again for selecting it.
Date: 8/4/2019 3:58:00 PM
Ha, Ha! Good one Curtis! Love the last two lines. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings,Kim
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/4/2019 7:52:00 PM
Thanks, Kim! Sometimes, words just pop out of nowhere. Like I said to Jan, I love limericks, win, or lose.
Date: 8/4/2019 1:39:00 PM
Fun poem, Curtis. Love it.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/4/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thanks, Line! And, thanks for the tip!
Date: 8/4/2019 12:28:00 PM
what a witty string of limericks I am so glad you joined in the fun Curtis:-) hugs Jan xx
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/4/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! I enjoy limericks, win or lose!
Date: 8/4/2019 5:46:00 AM
He'll be having soup through a straw for a while Curtis. Tom
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/4/2019 11:03:00 AM
Yeah, Tom, I think you may be right about that! When I read that there was a contest on limericks, I couldn't pass up the opportunity to throw my hat in the ring. It may not place, but it was fun to do.
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