James Inman Poet Free verse

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Dark hours pass into    eternity,           I can not die.

My skin rots in clumps of putrid... oozing... flesh,          yet I linger.

God has forsaken me,      as I have him.

You have escaped this desolate world     now     I see    ALL IS for naught.
 



Your Name:  James Inman
Date:  09/20/15
Contest:  Four Lines

Four Lines Contest-1
Broken Wings
10/18/2015

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Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 10, 2015 at 11:34 AM God has forsaken you...Into HIS HEART!!!! James Inman October 10, 2015 at 11:50 AM Thank you for reading.

Michael Tor September 28, 2015 at 11:06 PM James congratulations on your win! James Inman October 10, 2015 at 11:49 AM Thanks Michael.

Skat A September 28, 2015 at 9:53 PM James,, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT** James Inman October 10, 2015 at 11:49 AM Thanks, SKAT.

Tammy Reams September 27, 2015 at 9:17 AM Congrats on your 1st place win James! Love the darkness! James Inman September 27, 2015 at 10:21 AM Thank you for visiting Tammy, and the nice comment.

Jan Allison September 26, 2015 at 5:29 PM gosh this is deep and dark James many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx James Inman September 27, 2015 at 10:20 AM Thanks Jan.

Kp Nunez September 25, 2015 at 5:49 PM Oh, so dark...Sharp images in my mind even makes my stomach queasy. I see that this won in the 4-line contest. Congrats, James. Kim James Inman September 25, 2015 at 9:08 PM Thank you Kim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 24, 2015 at 11:34 PM Wonderful expressions James! Congrats on big win! James Inman September 25, 2015 at 9:02 PM Thank you Dr Sharma.

John Lawless September 24, 2015 at 8:53 PM Nicely done James..conjures up a false dawn in a foggy graveyard... congrats on the win. James Inman September 24, 2015 at 9:53 PM Thanks John.

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2015 at 3:23 PM wow, a really strong image in this one. a very tragic image! Congrats for your well deserved win, my friend. James Inman September 24, 2015 at 9:52 PM Thanks for the nice comment.

Alexis Y. September 23, 2015 at 8:44 PM James, congrats on your win:-)Alexis James Inman September 23, 2015 at 8:53 PM Thanks, Alexis

Casarah Nance September 23, 2015 at 6:38 PM ooh good write! Grats on your win! :) James Inman September 23, 2015 at 8:52 PM Thanks for the nice comment, Casarah.

Eve Roper September 23, 2015 at 5:57 PM Congratulations on your win, James. Hugs Eve James Inman September 23, 2015 at 8:50 PM Thank you, Eve.

Frederic Parker September 23, 2015 at 1:24 PM all is for naught..dark and deep write..congratulation James Inman September 23, 2015 at 2:34 PM Thank you Frederic, I like the dark ones.