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Dark hours pass into eternity, I can not die. My skin rots in clumps of putrid... oozing... flesh, yet I linger. God has forsaken me, as I have him.
You have escaped this desolate world now I see ALL IS for naught.
Your Name: James Inman Date: 09/20/15 Contest: Four Lines Four Lines Contest-1 Broken Wings 10/18/2015

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Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 10/10/2015 11:34:00 AM
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God has forsaken you...Into HIS HEART!!!!
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James Inman
Date: 10/10/2015 11:50:00 AM
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Thank you for reading.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/28/2015 11:06:00 PM
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James congratulations on your win!
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James Inman
Date: 10/10/2015 11:49:00 AM
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Thanks Michael.
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Skat A
Date: 9/28/2015 9:53:00 PM
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James,, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**
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James Inman
Date: 10/10/2015 11:49:00 AM
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Thanks, SKAT.
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Tammy Reams
Date: 9/27/2015 9:17:00 AM
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Congrats on your 1st place win James! Love the darkness!
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James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 10:21:00 AM
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Thank you for visiting Tammy, and the nice comment.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 5:29:00 PM
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gosh this is deep and dark James many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 10:20:00 AM
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Thanks Jan.
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Kp Nunez
Date: 9/25/2015 5:49:00 PM
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Oh, so dark...Sharp images in my mind even makes my stomach queasy. I see that this won in the 4-line contest. Congrats, James. Kim
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James Inman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:08:00 PM
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Thank you Kim
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/24/2015 11:34:00 PM
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Wonderful expressions James! Congrats on big win!
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James Inman
Date: 9/25/2015 9:02:00 PM
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Thank you Dr Sharma.
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John Lawless
Date: 9/24/2015 8:53:00 PM
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Nicely done James..conjures up a false dawn in a foggy graveyard... congrats on the win.
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James Inman
Date: 9/24/2015 9:53:00 PM
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Thanks John.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/24/2015 3:23:00 PM
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wow, a really strong image in this one. a very tragic image! Congrats for your well deserved win, my friend.
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James Inman
Date: 9/24/2015 9:52:00 PM
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Thanks for the nice comment.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 9/23/2015 8:44:00 PM
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James, congrats on your win:-)Alexis
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James Inman
Date: 9/23/2015 8:53:00 PM
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Thanks, Alexis
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Casarah Nance
Date: 9/23/2015 6:38:00 PM
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ooh good write! Grats on your win! :)
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James Inman
Date: 9/23/2015 8:52:00 PM
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Thanks for the nice comment, Casarah.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/23/2015 5:57:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win, James. Hugs Eve
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James Inman
Date: 9/23/2015 8:50:00 PM
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Thank you, Eve.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/23/2015 1:24:00 PM
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all is for naught..dark and deep write..congratulation
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James Inman
Date: 9/23/2015 2:34:00 PM
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Thank you Frederic, I like the dark ones.

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