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In time that it is present I can feel What? I feel the breath that seeps right through my veins and blood. The utter whisper of innocence Without the compulsory echo of condescending do-gooders. However when I do suffer and bones ache like swollen doors I wish to re-live sweet sickly infant. To pack my mouth with grinding sugary confections To neglect to brush my teeth soon after To run regardless of the pain And spring out to stranger the mocking tongue of youth. I wish to mock philanthropist, pompous, arrogant human. I want to cycle in the battering rain Whilst screaming echoed breaths in the wind brash wind. Just before I die I want to live again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/24/2009 9:15:00 AM
just checking up on you .........ready to read more of your work!
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Date: 3/10/2009 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Fantastic Free Verse contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/8/2009 12:13:00 PM
Dear Tabitha - CONGRATS on your WIN in Christie's contest. Extremely well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/7/2009 4:08:00 PM
Congrats on placing in christies contest. you dne a reat job with this write.....
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Date: 3/7/2009 1:41:00 PM
Tabitha congratulations on your place in Christie's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/6/2009 12:18:00 PM
Hi Tabitha.. poignant and powerful poetry... congrats on your win
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Date: 3/6/2009 10:43:00 AM
Wow. Yes, and don't we all. Congratulations on your win in Christie's contest! So well deserved. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:03:00 AM
Great job, and a wonderful winning poem! Congratulations in placing in the contest!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:06:00 AM
Tabitha ... your write is wondefully penned... great job... and congrats on your win.. ~ Arany
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Date: 3/3/2009 9:57:00 AM
Tabitha, the desire to "pack my mouth with grinding sugary confections" is urging me to go out on a hunting expedition for chocolate bunnies. The last two lines really bring the poem's message to a head. Great work! Carolyn
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