Old - Past- Over (Triple Tanka)
OLD – PAST – OVER (triple Tanka)
i love those old tunes
played on my old victrola
there’s a needle scratch
but I don’t care it’s times past
all those carefree days that passed
laying by the hour
listening to a simple tune
over and over
dreaming of my comely lass
who’s whispering “i love you”
drigo’s serenade
and by mischa elman played
over and over
i dread this moment’s end
old days old loves over
Copyright © Daver Austin | Year Posted 2010
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