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Old - Past- Over (Triple Tanka)

OLD – PAST – OVER (triple Tanka) i love those old tunes played on my old victrola there’s a needle scratch but I don’t care it’s times past all those carefree days that passed laying by the hour listening to a simple tune over and over dreaming of my comely lass who’s whispering “i love you” drigo’s serenade and by mischa elman played over and over i dread this moment’s end old days old loves over

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Date: 5/15/2010 6:29:00 AM
Simple and deep at the same time. Great write.
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Date: 5/13/2010 5:55:00 PM
well done on the tanka,..p.d.
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:54:00 PM
But those old days and old lovers make for dynamic memories. Like Yogi said, it ain't over until it's over. Vince
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Date: 5/11/2010 1:21:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one. I like the creative presentation. Keep on writing and sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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Date: 5/11/2010 9:05:00 AM
Enjoyed reading today!! God bless you!! I have a few good songs I like to play over and over.
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