Oklahoma

Dusty old dirt roads Under the blue open sky; Pastures and prairies.

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Effie Blake

Date: 1/27/2009 10:30:00 AM

Wonderful view! I'm originally from Texas, but I passed through Oklahoma on bus a few times. It reminds me of the rolling lands of Indiana a bit but not so cold. Peace.

Abe Lopez

Date: 1/12/2009 4:24:00 PM

This is a mirrored reflection of home.......Nice

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/30/2008 2:59:00 AM

Congrats making the hot list. DN

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/29/2008 6:36:00 PM

And the SOONERS!! If Penn State can't play for the championship, let Oklahoma reign supreme. Vince

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/18/2008 8:15:00 PM

Raul, In 3 lines YOU have Described Oklahoma Do YOU live There Your Haiku Buddy...HG

Steve Edmonds

Date: 12/18/2008 12:46:00 AM

Nice haiku Raul, If I wasn't home that would make me feel homesick. It describes the land that I love. Caramel

Date: 12/17/2008 1:52:00 PM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration! Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/17/2008 1:44:00 PM

I've never been to Oklahoma but this doesn't sound much different than North Dakota where I was raised. It brings up memories. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Love, Joyce

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/17/2008 1:12:00 PM

I live in Oklahoma and this describes it pretty well. Thanks for your comments. Love Elizabeth

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/17/2008 5:43:00 AM

Think I just might love it there. Nothing like wide open spaces for me. Absolutely awesome haiku! Love, Shar

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/17/2008 4:16:00 AM

Great Haiku. I've never been there, but like Barbara, you have given me a lovely scene for my minds eye. As always, thank you for sharing your thoughtful words and talents. You are always an inspiration. Love Robin

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/17/2008 3:21:00 AM

A beautiful scene i know well, coming from the heart of the prairies - i miss it so much it hurts. lovely, Kristin

Daniel Neal

Date: 12/17/2008 1:28:00 AM

what a nice scene you painted. This captures the essence clearly. DN

Brian Strand

Date: 12/17/2008 12:08:00 AM

A movie in 3 lines Raul.Nice one Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words

Michael Torres

Date: 12/16/2008 8:15:00 PM

Raul this is a beautiful image that you have created. You not only an excellent poet but you are a kind and gelntle soul. and true friend God blessl you Michael

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/16/2008 7:50:00 PM

Raul this Haiku is very well written and speaks nothing but the truth - God Bless, MJ

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/16/2008 7:33:00 PM

Wow, this is super. Ive never been to Oklahoma but this is what I would imagine its like. BG