Barbara Gorelick Poet Light Verse

Ok Abe, Your Up Next

Ok Abe, you’re up next


Oh the fickle finger of fate
HG tags me..the hour is late.
I’ll be glad to pass on the spud..
Please…don’t drop with a thud
Our talented Abe will surely respond
By tagging someone of whom he is fond 
This game is raucous, writing such fun,
For our Souper Abe ..take it and run….

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Carolyn Devonshire May 21, 2009 at 3:04 PM Hope he took the spud and didn't thud! Great humor, Barbara. Love from you fellow LNC, Carolyn

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire May 19, 2009 at 6:08 PM Dear Barbeeg my LOVE A well written TAG I have been reading Tag POEMS all day What a great Game LOVE YOU FOREVER and ALWAYS. ..HG

Nathan Leccese May 19, 2009 at 4:22 PM Thanks for the comment and pointing out my type-o. I can't stand it when I fat finger stuff and don't notice it. ;-) Nate

Diane Christian May 19, 2009 at 12:30 PM LOL. a great super poem, this is wonderful abe is a great friend to us all, God bles from diane

Debbie Guzzi May 19, 2009 at 11:21 AM pace, fret....standing in the batting cage ..warming up LIght & Love

Sharon Winter May 19, 2009 at 8:02 AM Ha ha! Nice work Barbara. And another great poet/friend keeps the game going fine! Well done! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins May 19, 2009 at 6:56 AM Well done Barbara.. this is off and running.

Carrie Richards May 19, 2009 at 6:29 AM Can't wait to see what happens next!!! Round and round it goes, where it stops ...nobody knows!!

Lena Townsend May 18, 2009 at 11:32 PM Awesome write. Nice Rhyme and Flow to this one. Abe will answer the call. Smiles from Lolita

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire May 18, 2009 at 8:50 PM Dear Barbara, This game is so Good for The FAMILY Bringing us closer Who will Abe tag I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Nathan Leccese May 18, 2009 at 8:25 PM The ryme and flow in this is great. I'm not sure I follow exactly what it means but none the less very well done! Nate