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Oiling My Feathers

solid when you're cool vaporized when you get hot can't live without you *Inspired by Water Haiku Contest

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John Michaels

Date: 11/1/2018 6:52:00 AM

Clever and oh, so true... nice write, Maureen! Regards, John.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/1/2018 8:02:00 AM

Thank you John :) xomo

Silent One

Date: 8/17/2018 3:17:00 PM

Very clever Mo..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/18/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thank you SO xo

John Lawless

Date: 8/16/2018 4:06:00 PM

but OH that sweet relief of floating in between....Nice one Mo...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/16/2018 6:49:00 PM

Indeed ;) thank you John! xomo

Anil Deo

Date: 8/15/2018 9:15:00 AM

Sounds like water, could be a spouse (wink, wink). love it

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/15/2018 11:53:00 AM

You got it exactly Anil, you read me well :) thank you! xomo

Jack Ellison

Date: 8/15/2018 9:00:00 AM

You're talking about us no doubt!!! LOL, Good luck dear Mo!!! XOX

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/15/2018 12:10:00 PM

Nah babe you're cool all the time ;) xomo!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/15/2018 7:53:00 AM

This shows that one can write poetry about anything - nicely done, Maureen.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/15/2018 8:55:00 AM

But will anyone read a poem about anything ;) this is my second on this theme, funny it started with a line from the first before morphing into its own. Thank you Agnes! xomo

Chris Green

Date: 8/15/2018 7:48:00 AM

Wow, this was so cool. I love how you did this. Fantastic.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/15/2018 8:52:00 AM

Thank you my friend! :) xomo!