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Oiling My Feathers

solid when you're cool

           vaporized when you get hot

           can't live without you





*Inspired by Water Haiku Contest

relationshipwaterlight verse

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John Michaels

November 1, 2018 at 6:52 AM

Clever and oh, so true... nice write, Maureen! Regards, John.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 1, 2018 at 8:02 AM

Thank you John :) xomo

Silent One

August 17, 2018 at 3:17 PM

Very clever Mo..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 18, 2018 at 8:24 AM

Thank you SO xo

John Lawless

August 16, 2018 at 4:06 PM

but OH that sweet relief of floating in between....Nice one Mo...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 16, 2018 at 6:49 PM

Indeed ;) thank you John! xomo

Anil Deo

August 15, 2018 at 9:15 AM

Sounds like water, could be a spouse (wink, wink). love it

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 15, 2018 at 11:53 AM

You got it exactly Anil, you read me well :) thank you! xomo

Jack Ellison

August 15, 2018 at 9:00 AM

You're talking about us no doubt!!! LOL, Good luck dear Mo!!! XOX

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 15, 2018 at 12:10 PM

Nah babe you're cool all the time ;) xomo!

Agnes Krampe

August 15, 2018 at 7:53 AM

This shows that one can write poetry about anything - nicely done, Maureen.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

August 15, 2018 at 8:55 AM

But will anyone read a poem about anything ;) this is my second on this theme, funny it started with a line from the first before morphing into its own. Thank you Agnes! xomo