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''Oh, You Are Rich''

While it was raining heavily outside, Two children in shabby, tattered dress Stormed into our glass roofed patio And at the door, for mercy did pause They said they were out to buy empty cans To make a living and support their family The only work they could do at their age And it was not their intent to dilly dally I was in no mood to entertain them As my hands with pending works were tight A week’s laundry and some shopping to do But was rather indisposed to send them outright As I looked onto their starved faces I felt a hard tug deep from within After a moment’s thought, when I invited them in In innocent mirth, their eyes did spin When I brewed for them two cups of coffee And gave some homemade snacks to munch Their little faces bloomed in joy As if savoring a favorite fruit punch. All the while their curious eyes went Flashing from nook to nook and every corner On my well stacked shelves of china pottery And the costly gadgets and the gas burner When they were about to leave They simply said- “Oh! You are rich!” Of course a new revelation, it was to me Something I had never thought over much Yes, with a roof overhead With enough means to feed my kids And with a steady income every month How rich I am compared to those hapless lads Now, though many months have slipped by I reiterate to myself what those children said ‘Oh! You are rich’ lest I shall ever forget again, How rich I am and this thought keeps me ahead! From that day onwards, never have I failed To offer profuse words of thanks and prayer To Him who has blessed me thus With riches galore and a bounty to share! Thanksgiving Blessings Poetry Contest Sponsor: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 12/14/2021 11:33:00 AM
WOW!!! What a story/write. Many are rich but do not know it. They only want more. Be blessed each day with what you have. Give when you can. Giving will make you rich in heart. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 11/29/2021 1:14:00 AM
A very thought provoking and appreciative poem Valsa. I imagine you are a very kind person. Enjoyed. Debx
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Date: 11/24/2021 10:01:00 PM
A blissful write on thanksgiving Valsa! Best wishes!
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Valsa George
Date: 11/25/2021 11:00:00 PM
Thank you so much you gifted Wordsmith !
Date: 11/24/2021 8:27:00 PM
Valsa, you've submitted an absolutely brilliant contest entry submission. It appeals to me greatly. Thanks for your visit to my page.  Blessings and kindest regards
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Valsa George
Date: 11/25/2021 10:59:00 PM
Your heartfelt words of appreciation are greatly relished dear Lassad ! Thank you much ! Warm Regards!
Date: 11/24/2021 7:40:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful contest entry, Valsa. I really like it. It's all relative, after all. Blessings and Bounty, Gershon
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Valsa George
Date: 11/24/2021 8:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon ! Glad you liked it !
Date: 11/24/2021 12:01:00 PM
How sad a picture you paint. ~~
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Valsa George
Date: 11/24/2021 8:15:00 PM
It was a sad but happy turned moment .... ! Thank you Victor !
Date: 11/24/2021 10:51:00 AM
You are rich in what you can take with you . . . . Aloha!
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Valsa George
Date: 11/24/2021 8:14:00 PM
Hope so... ! Thank you Rico !
Date: 11/24/2021 6:18:00 AM
Dear Valsa, what a captivating story! I totally understand what you mean - those words from two needy children are so true! Many of us are comfortable, if not wealthy - but don't realize how fortunate we are! Your story is unique, told with so much empathy - is a wonderful lesson - to be always remembered! Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Valsa George
Date: 11/24/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Malabika for this lovely comment. Glad I am with a group of gifted poets who encourage me with empathy and understanding ! Each poem, I read here is a jewel ! Happy Thanksgiving !
Date: 11/24/2021 5:25:00 AM
You remain humble when life has given you much. Your story resonates my friend in act of goodwill. So much more to wealth in your heart than material things. I hear your gracious thanks, Valsa. Stay blessed!
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Valsa George
Date: 11/24/2021 5:37:00 AM
I am not rich in the ordinary sense, but rich in many ways and am ever thankful ! This is based on a real incident ! Thank you so much Vijay for sparing your precious time to read and encourage my simple verse. You must be still working ! I am retired and am not bound by the hands of time....! You are a great poet with a big heart !

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