Oh Those Eyes

All those that I have loved before and the ones that will come after would never have those eyes Oh those eyes the moon of night those smiling eyes that do not shine yet glow with comfort in my life His unforgotten cheeks a musky scent of blown gardenias treaded softly in my sleep His Spring-kissed skin The fresh sweet taste of last aquatic dew which poured and reached my soul within Without demand I think of him And whoever said that men can never smell like flowers and whoever said that men can never taste like rain Those are the ones who never stretched their arms as far as to behold the one and whisper out his name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/3/2016 1:04:00 PM
I really like that last stanza. This flows so softly, and there's a hint of loss and melancholy. Nicely written, this was a pleasure to stumble upon today. -G
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Date: 6/13/2015 5:56:00 PM
I seemto keep being attracted back to your eyes!
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Date: 4/19/2015 10:14:00 AM
That is very high quality work, Charmaine. I enjoyed it immensely. Julia, :)
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Date: 4/16/2015 1:45:00 PM
Poetry and painting delightfully hand in hand, written by whom only can with these writes. Simply lovely, James :)
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:42:00 PM
Absolutely charming like your name! Your Mommy and Daddy must have know you'd be a charmer! This poem is just another reason, you are the sweetheart of the Soup! Lots and lots of love from across the seas! Your good friend, Jack xxxxx
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Date: 4/5/2015 1:34:00 PM
"And whoever said that men can never smell like flowers and whoever said that men can never taste like rain"....Super...
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Date: 4/2/2015 7:51:00 PM
Hello fine poet, hope all is well. It has been some time since I have read your work. This was the first and it is lovely. It is filled with wonderful lines. I look forward to reading more. Well done CC... TAH
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Date: 4/1/2015 12:08:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again Charmaine. Thanks for your Visit.
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Date: 3/31/2015 7:19:00 PM
moving descriptions of memories. vivid and pretty
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Date: 3/31/2015 3:36:00 PM
If you are even half as beautiful as this poem, then you are a princess indeed! Loved this!
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:32:00 PM
A georgeous painting your words overshadowed!
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:31:00 PM
Wow, love the whole poem but those wrap up lines...Wow, Wow, Wow, "and whoever said that men can't smell like flowers...can never taste like rain...stretched their arms...whisper out his name. A Fav!
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Date: 3/30/2015 1:46:00 PM
So romantic , it makes me want to sigh. Very lovely, Charma. Thanks for reading my poems today.
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Date: 3/30/2015 12:18:00 PM
Your feelings come through strong and straight from the heart where most good poetry is born. Emile.
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Date: 3/29/2015 10:38:00 PM
Very pretty poetry! Thanks for your kind words! Peace & Love Mathew Anish
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Date: 3/29/2015 10:34:00 PM
Eyes are truly the gates to the soul, and a Beautiful smile will make a heart skip a beat. I Love this Poem. I will read morn soon have a great night.
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Date: 3/29/2015 10:35:00 PM
Ouch lol sorry I ment to say more not morn.
Date: 3/29/2015 8:58:00 PM
We find rare love when we have rare love to give my Lady Hawk...you have yours, and you cherish him right and tight. He glows for a love like yours for sure! Your perceptions of his qualities are very enchanting, xool masculinity, and a great poem of love Charma...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/29/2015 4:10:00 PM
Charma, You really know how to charm a man. The eyes are the windows to the soul, Beautifully written and with such passion Take Care Kevin
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Date: 3/28/2015 9:39:00 AM
Eyes do have such an impact, I so enjoyed this piece. Blessed is the man who gets to look into your lovely eyes Charmaine.
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Date: 3/27/2015 5:53:00 PM
So beautiful Charmaine. Those sound like eyes you need to hold on to...a favourite.... Hugs Tim
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Date: 3/27/2015 5:44:00 PM
beautiful tender write Charma:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/27/2015 5:36:00 PM
Romantic and sweet...I've written a poem about the scent of my husband. It's delicious. Walking Into His Scent. This is lovely, Charmaine. Beautiful, tender, and sweet. Well done.
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