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Oh, Take Me Home

Oh, take me home, sweet journey of the mind, along the many roads I've known that wind through times of blessedness. . . through spans of dearth, past corridors of woe, down paths of mirth – to when my Now could not have been divined. My sentimental byways are entwined with childhood mementos that still bind me to the dearest place I've known on earth. Oh, take me home. Oh, take me back again that I might find the carefree days on lanes I left behind, when all my world was small in size and girth. I rushed to leave. . . too late I learned the worth of things to which the eyes of youth are blind. Oh, take me home! For Leonora Galinta's A Home Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/1/2013 7:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Stunningly beautiful poem. We rush to be grown and leave home, then long to be back.
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Date: 5/30/2013 6:33:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea, on the win. Thnx for its tender touch!! Jag
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Date: 5/29/2013 5:31:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win. AO
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Date: 5/29/2013 2:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on winning this contest. With a healing way back to a home sweet home. Thanks also. (^_^) Noel
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Date: 5/28/2013 7:26:00 PM
Ahhhh took me home!!!!! Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 5/28/2013 5:35:00 PM
Beautifully done Andrea. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 5/28/2013 5:26:00 PM
Andrea congratulation on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:13:00 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:30:00 PM
Congrats my friend again. It's superb. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:15:00 PM
- Thanks for letting me visit your home - Congratulations on your win in the contest: "A Home" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2013 1:11:00 PM
Nicely done, congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 5/28/2013 12:48:00 PM
My big hearty congratulations my dearest friend , Andrea for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/22/2011 10:34:00 PM
I went back and looked for you..and as I expected, is terrific. Ive never tried this form..think I will...BG
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Date: 1/8/2011 1:22:00 PM
I really thought this was great Andrea.A very nice 2nd.place on this one.Can you believe it I forgot to enter my haiku oh well mabee next.Appreciate all your comments.~Luv~Teresa
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank Herrera's "Fondest Memory" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/23/2010 11:15:00 AM
Andrea, this is so good, added to favorites. As I read this silently I could feel the flow and rhythm of it. Really beautiful.
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Date: 12/22/2010 1:25:00 PM
What a terrific 2nd. place win Andrea thanks for the nice comment on my win.This is gonna be short but sweet trying to get some comments wrote.Take care and have a Merry Christmas.Your friend Teresa
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Date: 12/20/2010 11:31:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on this well deserved win for this contest. Even at work, our mind won't leave such home and always bring the inner peace it gives. You remind me of my forthcoming vacation to my homeland by next year. A lovely read and thanks for sharing. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/20/2010 11:02:00 PM
I'm proud to share with you Andrea. This is beautiful and we're thiking alike. congratulations. i am just able to sneak a few minutes each day to post and read. After Christmas I should be back in full force. Love, joyce
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:33:00 PM
however did I miss this gem, Andrea?? Eek goes to show that I haven't read all your beauties! Sorry about that but I am super happy you entered this and that it won in Frank's contest-- I am more than happy to share 2nd with you-- how I enjoyed the nostalgic voice you used here--will try to catch up on email later ok-- have one foot out the door-- hahah hugs to you :) Super congrats! nikko :)
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:14:00 PM
sentimental, andrea! a gem of glittering , beaded wordings… kudos for a well-deserved win!! hugggs, nette
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:38:00 PM
A beautiful poem and fondest memory. many congratulations for this top win.
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:57:00 PM
Excellent Andrea, I would love to know Where? It sounds so perfect. Congrats tis is so special. Harry
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:12:00 PM
Once again, a stunning poem, Andrea!! You are on a roll !! :) Well deserved win! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of frank, Andrea
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