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Oh Sweet Rose

Beautiful rose covered in your petal finery sweet silken satin soft feelings singing in praise touching deeply inside Gentle heart of sweetness tenderness flows from your sweet scenting aroma floats inside the scent Heavenly emotions enchanting beauty looking amazing red in passion hot soft whispering pink blushing orange warm as the sun beams glow Dressed in white you crown angels petals softly Whispers flow on scented air words inside I love you Kissing and hugging my love deeply darling surrendering to you without doubt purest rose I trust from the petals into my heart a crowning jewel you are queen amongst flowers amazingly baby

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Date: 9/18/2014 6:27:00 AM
Oh, also, how about a predicate adverb and adjective? Check them out on Google. Jim Horn
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Date: 9/18/2014 6:26:00 AM
Nouns, Pronouns, verbs,adverbs and adjectives. Which one do you think amazingly is? Also, have you ever heard of sentence diagramming before? Jim Check Him Out. Love it.
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Date: 9/18/2014 5:57:00 AM
Love the ending
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Date: 9/15/2014 10:25:00 AM
I have a few problems with it. First, you should make a song out of it with all of its splendid imagery. Second, only fallacy I found was amazing should be amazingly. Other than that, it is perfect in every way. Jim Horn
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/18/2014 6:01:00 AM
I like spell check, but there's no comparison to Jim-check. Thanks for keeping us straight.
Date: 3/10/2014 1:26:00 PM
I read this, Liam...Came back to read it again....I was unwell...Couldn't post at the time. This is a jewel! One of your absolute finest...You are QUEEN...amongst flowers, baby...I love how you speak to the reader...Using that YOU....Very endearing. It's going to my favorites. You do know that you are a favorite poet, right? Yup..You're there in my list. Write on...Keep enchanting...You're so good at romance!
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Date: 3/6/2014 11:14:00 AM
Scenting softly and beautiful..So romantic your words Liam..Going to my favs
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