Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Oh Sweet Rose

Beautiful rose
covered in 
your petal finery
sweet silken
satin soft feelings
singing in praise
touching deeply inside

Gentle heart 
of sweetness
tenderness flows
from your sweet
scenting aroma
floats inside 
the scent

Heavenly emotions
enchanting beauty
looking amazing
red in passion
hot soft whispering 
pink blushing
orange warm
as the sun beams glow

Dressed in white
you crown angels
petals softly 
Whispers flow
on scented air
words inside 
I love you

Kissing and hugging
my love deeply darling
surrendering to you
without doubt
purest rose

I trust 
from the petals
into my heart
a crowning jewel
you are queen
amongst flowers 
amazingly baby

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James Horn September 18, 2014 at 6:27 AM Oh, also, how about a predicate adverb and adjective? Check them out on Google. Jim Horn

James Horn September 18, 2014 at 6:26 AM Nouns, Pronouns, verbs,adverbs and adjectives. Which one do you think amazingly is? Also, have you ever heard of sentence diagramming before? Jim Check Him Out. Love it.

Jerry T Curtis September 18, 2014 at 5:57 AM Love the ending

James Horn September 15, 2014 at 10:25 AM I have a few problems with it. First, you should make a song out of it with all of its splendid imagery. Second, only fallacy I found was amazing should be amazingly. Other than that, it is perfect in every way. Jim Horn Jerry T Curtis September 18, 2014 at 6:01 AM I like spell check, but there's no comparison to Jim-check. Thanks for keeping us straight.

Eileen Manassian March 10, 2014 at 1:26 PM I read this, Liam...Came back to read it again....I was unwell...Couldn't post at the time. This is a jewel! One of your absolute finest...You are QUEEN...amongst flowers, baby...I love how you speak to the reader...Using that YOU....Very endearing. It's going to my favorites. You do know that you are a favorite poet, right? Yup..You're there in my list. Write on...Keep enchanting...You're so good at romance!

Charmaine Chircop March 6, 2014 at 11:14 AM Scenting softly and beautiful..So romantic your words Liam..Going to my favs