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Oh, Sweet Hummer

A sweet hummingbird gives me great pleasure, I love their iridescent hovering; they are a gift from God and a treasure, how, lovely is their feather covering. Oh, listen and you can hear their wings beat, those long bills and longer tongues drinking nectar; they hover backwards and up-side down- repeat, hummer is a skilled nectar collector. There are many kinds of hummers in the world, vast plumage and sizes- like flying gems; nothing more stunning that a hummer curled, at pretty flowers on long swaying stems. Nothing is more beautiful than a dip for hummer- then after, a little drip. _______________________ May 9, 2018 Poetry/Sonnet/Oh, Sweet Hummer Copyright Protected, ID 18-1020-812-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Your Best Sonnet in 2018, sponsor, John Hamilton Fifth Place
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Roper Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 5:48 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
Ashley Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 5:59 PM
So lovely, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your beautifully penned poem. I just love the little hummers too..! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Nance Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:34 AM
I love this, such a beautiful poem for a beautiful bird. :)
Gentry Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. Beautiful!
Hamilton Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Lovely Constance congrats!
Gentry Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 2:02 PM
A refreshing and beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. I love watching them. Enjoyed this very much.
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Congrats on your placement, Broken wings! Hummingbirds ARE my favorite birds. Love them so much I wrote a tanka called "The Hummingbird". You've written a lovely poem, by the way!
Gauthier Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Lovely tribute, BW. Congrats on your most deserving placement.
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May 10, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Loveliness!! My best to you in the contest :) xomo!
Sands Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 3:56 PM
I love hummingbirds. This poem is a joy to read :)
Krutsinger Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 2:56 PM
hummer is indeed a skilled nectar collector. flying gems - your word choices are timelessly fine, Broken Wings. A Fantastic poem.
Michael Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 1:20 PM
I love the life in the poem...the joy expressed...Nice BW
Rodrigues Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 11:12 AM
Very pretty, Constance!
May Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 10:09 AM
Such beautiful birds...lovely write BW
La France Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Thank you Joseph
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