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Oh, Soul

Oh! soul, strum with every pulse, strings of wisdom Be in the known, yet, be conscientious of unknown What you claim to possess, don’t let it possess you Don’t speak words of sapience, unless you are true Borrow not thoughts of others, enlighten your own Never be the shadow that hinders seedlings’ growth Fear not when truth speaks, for a lie stings evermore Dispense not haughtiness, when arrogance you abhor Pretend not to be a giver, if motivation is to receive Giving isn’t nobility if you deem receiver unworthy Never teach others that which you don’t comprehend Learn the ways of sage, inspire hate to seek amends Judge, only if, you let others adjudicate your deeds Be cognizant of desires spuriously posing as needs Engage with humility when your ego dares to speak Boast not in futility~ time will not bend to your will Neither can you command a nightingale not to sing Strive to embrace divinity, be a messenger of peace Oh! soul, wander not~ search deep within to find it January 4, 2022 In conversation with our soul poetry contest Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 1/29/2022 11:52:00 AM
Wonderful words to live by.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/31/2022 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Valerie.
Date: 1/19/2022 6:18:00 AM
I returned ... And there is more depth in your poem. Shalom shalom Shanthi Om
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/31/2022 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Anil.
Date: 1/17/2022 5:02:00 PM
This is some excellent advice you have penned; I hope it's widely read.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/31/2022 8:11:00 AM
Thank you MLK.
Date: 1/14/2022 6:38:00 PM
Hi Vijay…..a well written, clever and powerful poem! Debx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/19/2022 8:13:00 AM
I just tried again. At your poem page where comments are written--a message says poet has turned off commenting. Then I wanted to send you a soup mail--but there too a message says you can't send a soup mail. May be it happened accidentally. Check your settings again.
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Deb M
Date: 1/15/2022 3:00:00 PM
Hi Vijay….my comments haven’t been turned off? Cheers Debx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2022 7:40:00 AM
Glad to read your comments, Deb. Many thanks. I see that you have turned off comments. Enjoyed reading your poem.
Date: 1/14/2022 7:05:00 AM
Amen, Tat Tvam Asi. Good safe advice in splendid poetry. Thanx VP
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thank you Anil--much appreciate.
Date: 1/13/2022 12:50:00 PM
I see this is a winner. I can see why. It's the kind of poem I am sure the sponsor was looking for. Great thoughts.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/15/2022 7:39:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 1/12/2022 12:50:00 AM
Deep philosophical thought. Didactic! Bless you, my dearest friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2022 11:57:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Value your opinion, as always.
Date: 1/11/2022 10:53:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Delightful and delighting from the start il the end... God bless you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2022 11:56:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit, Beata--many thanks.
Date: 1/11/2022 5:22:00 PM
A deep introspective write, Best wishes in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2022 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 1/11/2022 3:23:00 PM
Excellent wisdom resides within this piece; well done!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2022 11:55:00 AM
Thank you MLK--much appreciate.
Date: 1/10/2022 6:58:00 AM
Such profound Poetry... There is so much to ponder on... Thank you so much for sharing this thought provoking write... Pretend not to be a giver, if motivation is to receive Judge, only if, you let others adjudicate your deeds Boast not in futility~ time will not bend to your will Words of wisdom!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2022 11:15:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Supraja. Many thanks for stopping by with your wonderful feedback.
Date: 1/8/2022 7:58:00 PM
I love your conversation with your soul! especially" when your ego dares to speak" Have a great day! thanks for your comment!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Karen. Much appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/7/2022 2:54:00 PM
For sure this was a winner. Congrats to you, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2022 8:43:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 1/7/2022 2:46:00 PM
This inspires with words of wisdom, Vijay. It is wonderful when one can share such a relationship with the soul. ~Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:54:00 PM
Thank you for these insightful comments, Paul. Much appreciate. Regards.
Date: 1/7/2022 2:26:00 PM
Back with congratulations Vijay … so well deserved ! Susan :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:53:00 PM
Much appreciate your return visit my friend. Many thanks, Susan. Looking forward to reading your new poem soon.
Date: 1/7/2022 1:24:00 PM
Back with congrats on your top ten placement Vijay !!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:52:00 PM
Thank you for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate, Mike.
Date: 1/7/2022 12:16:00 PM
- When the thought process and the inner noise subside, the soul can speak to us in innumerable ways, Vijay :) - A beautiful poem, best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:52:00 PM
Thanks again.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:51:00 PM
You are right--soul speaks to us in many ways. Thank you Anne-Lise, for your kind remarks. Much appreciate.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2022 12:18:00 PM
- Congratulations !!! ... I see it is already a winning poem :)
Date: 1/7/2022 10:15:00 AM
How I love this poem and how articulately you tell us of the ways of life, the do's and don'ts and how we should search our soul. Congratulations on this win and Congratulations on having being chosen for Poetry Soups newest Anthology. Be well and safe my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:50:00 PM
Hope you had good time being away on vacation, Jennifer. Much appreciate your kind remarks my friend. Many thanks.
Date: 1/7/2022 9:24:00 AM
This wonderful poem has sage advice to enlighten the soul. I am so happy to see this on the winners list. It is very deserving. I am Faving it Vijay! Congratulations my friend. New year blessings xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:48:00 PM
Thank you my friend for stopping by with your insightful feedback. Honored by your FAVE and your kind remarks, Connie. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.
Date: 1/7/2022 8:26:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. I really enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day.......................................
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:47:00 PM
Thank you for your return visit Paula. Much appreciate. Blessings!
Date: 1/7/2022 8:05:00 AM
Great work. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thank you--much appreciate.
Date: 1/7/2022 7:51:00 AM
Just beautiful Vijay and so very poignant. I have so many favorite lines that I am faving it !Strive to embrace divinity, be a messenger of peace. You are an inspiration my friend. Sending blessings and peace to you and yours for a happy healthy new year. Susan :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:45:00 PM
You are so very kind my friend. Always a joy when you visit, Susan. A special treat to receive your FAVE and your inspiring feedback. My very best to you and your family for the new year.
Date: 1/7/2022 5:33:00 AM
Vijay, each and every line of this beauty stands alone as a powerful poem unto itself!! I am so deeply impressed!! This one is truly top-notch !!! Happy Friday!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:41:00 PM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate and value your opinion, as always.
Date: 1/7/2022 2:42:00 AM
Oh Vijay, this is so deep. An encouragement of wisdom to one's own soul. I love it. I am faving this amazing gem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:40:00 PM
You are so very kind my friend. A special treat to read your kind remarks and receive your FAVE. Many many thanks, BJ.
Date: 1/7/2022 1:20:00 AM
So happy you chose to participate, Vijay! You honour the contest with your presence! Congrats on your win, ‘twas quite a task for me to chose 10 out of 50 entries
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/7/2022 2:39:00 PM
Many thanks US for sponsoring contest. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
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