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Oh My, the Sun Is Falling - Nursery Rhyme

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Oh My, The Sun Is Falling - Nursery Rhyme Chicken lil' one, "Sky's falling, run", now he knows why it's getting hotter, It's not the sky, but sun, here's why, naught falling but heating up faster, An apple fell, and nut did tell, to run and hide, things will get better, No sky did fall, still, all appall, we thought, next time we'd be the wiser, Chicken lil' -- naught, *Leo, who got, the world to note, he's a pacesetter, Millennium, twice -- twenty-one, since science named it -- to the letter. This nursery rhyme means, What we call, "Global Warming", we used to call, "Summer". *Leo - Shorten for Galileo 2021 April 10 *2nd Place* Nursery Rhyme 4 ~~Eve Roper

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/17/2021 1:48:00 PM

Nicely done, William! congrats on your win in Eve's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/17/2021 2:14:00 PM

Many thanks, Kim, and to you even more, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2021 2:20:00 PM

- Back with a congratulations, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/16/2021 2:25:00 PM

Truly grateful, Anne-Lise, I am honored, Aloha!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/16/2021 12:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, William! Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/16/2021 1:14:00 PM

My thanks, Eve, for noting the specific age group my nursery rhymes had been aiming towards, and again, much enjoyed Aloha!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/15/2021 5:45:00 AM

A great lesson in this rhyme, William:) thank you for my placement in your abracadabra contest, it was interesting:)

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/15/2021 11:26:00 AM

The coinage since changed befitting the calamity, thanks, Jo, -- cheers, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2021 2:19:00 PM

great lesson teaching inside nursery rhyme . I smell a WIN with this one!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/12/2021 2:40:00 PM

Hm, exactly how does a win smell like ... chocolatey or perfumery? Sweet, Andrea, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2021 3:31:00 AM

- Great for the contest, William ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/11/2021 9:35:00 AM

I am appreciative, Anne-Lise, for your caring thoughts and encouraging words my friend, Aloha!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/10/2021 7:13:00 PM

Wow! Lovely nursery rhyme on such a current topic! And the picture - Awesome! BW ~ Mala

Hilo Poet
Date: 4/10/2021 8:27:00 PM

Though I since rewrote it, nonetheless, thank you kindly, Mala, your caring thoughts define you my friend, Aloha!