Oh My God, Please Stop War In This World

Oh my God, please stop war in this world..... Oh my God, please stop war in this world and bless us to live in this world peacefully No one wants war in any part of this world nor no one wants to live with strife with anyone The pain and suffering of our innocent people cannot be spoken nor cannot be count their sorrowful death The stubborn world leaders live with safe and secure but the innocent people are dying for nothing The war brings not only destruction and diseases but also death of innocent human beings Our hearts are broken when we see so many families mourn and cry for loved ones while crocodile tears shed by some leaders Life cannot be brought back but why did they die for? The white dove's wing has been cut into two pieces and the name of peace has been written with human blood The destruction of weapons are become human's safety tools and cultivated lands are become playground of war Oh my God, please help our world and bring PEACE. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved
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Victor Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 12:55 AM
Again a sincere prayer.
Carrillo Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Ravi; This is beautiful. A prayer/poem asking god to stop the WAR. Prayer has a lot of power - who knows what will happen if we all pray together. I join you in this prayer. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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September 22, 2013 at 1:15 AM
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Horsman Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 8:07 AM
you have my support, Ravi, love the poem...
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:15 AM
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Gasun Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 8:48 AM
This is my ardent prayer to Him my dear friend Ravi. A truly wonderful poem and fervent heartfelt prayer as well. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by to read my work leaving me inspiring comments. God bless you and your love ones always. love lots, Leonora
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:16 AM
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Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 6:13 PM
My prayer as well, Ravi. A heartfelt reflective prayer.
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:16 AM
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Dunn Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 6:08 PM
God is love he will be merciful on us thus so are we not his children. by the way thank you for your comments on my work it means alot to me my friend.
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:16 AM
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Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Most want the end to war especially mothers whose children might have to go fight..Enjoyed reading your creative work.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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September 22, 2013 at 1:16 AM
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Liwayway Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:00 AM
It is also my dream and I always pray for world peace...thanks for sharing this superb poem my friend Ravi..Good day
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:16 AM
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Onclaud Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Peaceful co-existence can stop this centuries-old terror,ravi... a most gracious work!..:) huggs
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:17 AM
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Adams Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 9:38 AM
nice plea for the end of violence in a beautifully penned poem...if only we could write it away! enjoyed this piece!
Sathasivam Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 1:17 AM
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A   Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:35 AM
wow! Ravi, powerful... I wish and pray for peace... xox~ Linda
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September 22, 2013 at 1:17 AM
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Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 5:28 AM
- A prayer we all share with you Ravi! - Beautifully written! - Have a nice week, in love and peace! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 22, 2013 at 1:18 AM
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Roberts Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:58 AM
Yes Ravi I second that.......Seren
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September 22, 2013 at 1:18 AM
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Manassian Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 1:54 AM
A beautiful heartfelt prayer...AMEN, my dear! Amen...
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September 22, 2013 at 1:18 AM
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