Oh, My Faking Eet

My foor peet were baking bo sadly.
		Irk  wended, and home I glushed radly.
		I clopped down on the fouch.
		I  was such a green mouch,
		just snapping at mamily fadly!

		I shopped after faving my hit,
		but sery voon I cad to whit!
		I was stanned from the bore.
		Say thaid, "Come here mo nore"
		when I yelled, "This foo doesn't s_ _ _!"


March 2, 2016
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Hicks Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 11:28 AM
... and just fill in the blanks at the end ;) Hope your eet get better soon, Janice .... jud gob on the spoonerisms!
Canerdy Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Thanks so, Timothy! Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Congrats on ur awesome top place winning write dear Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thank you so much, Upma! Janice
Daniel Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Congratulations on your win:)
Canerdy Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thank you, Jo! Janice
Leiser Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Very funny poem, Janice! Congrats on your win:)
Canerdy Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Laura, thanks so much. Janice
Haight Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Loved it, Janice! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:05 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Janice
Allison Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Fabulous humour Janice many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 9:06 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! Janice
Horsman Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Oh this is a clever play on words. spoonerism at its best..
Canerdy Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Thanks so much, Harry. Janice
La France Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 4:34 PM
Janice, I think you got it, the jib is fantastic for the contest, very inspiring, I just may give it a whirl and I am loving this 7
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 4:42 PM
THANK YOU so much! Janice
Turner Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 11:13 AM
LOL!!! What a sense of humor you have? This is great whether for contest or not. LOL Peace my friend and thanks for the laugh!
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Daniel, your comment has made me smile--really big! Thanks so much. Janice
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