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Oh My Darling

The sun rubbed our skin As if mother nature was caressing our arms and legs We waded through the water Acting like the children we once were, Sometimes, you could almost tell that it was so warm That the sun was making an invisible blanket around us. I would've loved to stay with you, just a moment more, for one last kiss, one last touch, before you left

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/13/2024 7:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/15/2017 10:53:00 PM
'The sun rubbed our skin' Argh! that sounds painful, loved the poem, though...
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