Premiere Contest WinnerOh, Mother Nature

Oh, be still . . . the tenderness of your mount flourishes thy peak, 
         as does the morning's day break bring sight to my troubled peace.
For the majesty of the florets above the green pastures speak,
         as the mighty eagle soars so does my soul’s appreciation increase.
Oh, Mother Nature . . . my spirit arises with hope in your innate release.



Re-submitted September 16, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 7:23 PM
I don't think I ever congratulated you on your superb win for this one, Laura. BIG congratulations, though belated.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 10:17 PM
A beautiful merging of the soul with nature...Congrats for the exquisite words you've shared Laura. :)
Walker Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Laura, congratulations on your well-deserved win. All the best, Sonia.
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Many congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Very lovely imagery, Laura. Congratulations on your Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 4:13 PM
many thanks sweet Sandra :)-luloo
La France Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Laura, congratulations on your first place win and your trophy, its a beautiful poem ~
Scars Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:41 AM
thank you sweet Broken Wings-this was an entry from one of your contests :)-luloo
May Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Great write and win Laura....Congrats
Scars Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:40 AM
thank you Joseph:)-luloo
Grasso Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:38 AM
This is very beautiful, Laura. Congratulations on a first place win!
Scars Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:43 AM
thank you Francis :)-luloo
Neumann Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:14 AM
Great poem. Congratulations, Kai
Scars Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 6:42 AM
thank you Kai :)-luloo
Merryman Avatar
July 23, 2016 at 8:39 PM
A stunning write, Laura! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
Scars Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 12:48 PM
thank you very much Kim :)-luloo
Misra Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Nicely expressed - the soothing influence of mother nature. Congrats on your win, Laura. ~karam~
Scars Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 9:20 AM
thank you Karam :)-luloo
Callus Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 4:53 PM
So beautiful, Laura, both the content and accompanying picture! Your spirit soars with the eagle to reach winning heights! Congratulations:) Regards // paul
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:36 PM
thank you sweet friend! :)-luloo
Devnath  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:35 PM
thank you BL :)-luloo
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 11:06 AM
A beautiful pic with beautiful lines composed. Congrats Laura. :) Sunita.
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:35 PM
thank you Sunita :)-luloo
Arnone Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 8:07 AM
A soaring sentiment. Congrats. :-)
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:34 PM
thank you Tom :)-luloo
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:34 PM
thank you Tom :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 6:39 AM
Deserving congratulations LuLoo...
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:34 PM
thank you Charlie :)-luloo
Gupta Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 11:48 PM
Congratulations for your great win ...
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:33 PM
many thanks Probir :)-luloo
Day Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 10:05 PM
Nicely composed quintain. Congratulations for your impressive 3rd place win in the One Staza One-Only contest! Jesse
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:32 PM
thank you Jesse :)-luloo
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July 19, 2016 at 5:48 PM
Laura, Fabulous verse with great flow Richard
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:32 PM
thank you Richard :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 3:55 PM
Very good, Laura, I feel myself soring with the might eagle. Congratulations on your win. Hugs
Scars Avatar
July 21, 2016 at 1:31 PM
thank you such a lovely lady you are Eve...:)-luloo
Devnath  Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Beautiful poem on Mother Nature done with a beautiful pen. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
Scars Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 2:37 PM
thank you BL :)-luloo
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 9:17 PM
So beautiful, Laura Loo. This contest is one of my favorites at the moment and I have not even tried it yet. Yikes!!
Scars Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 12:04 PM
you're so silly lol thanks lady :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 5:05 PM
beautifully written LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 3:06 PM
thank you lady :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 3:44 PM
A very pleasant feel you give here Laura. Good luck in the contest.
Scars Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 3:06 PM
thank you Tim :)-luloo
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