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For the Mother's Day Poetry Contest of  Benjamin Bartley

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Oh, Mother, what from you did I inherit? I’m not so slim. I’m dark-haired with eyes green-blue. You’re red-haired and slender; hazel are your eyes. There’s little of myself I see in you. You swear you know the only true religion. No confidence have I though in your church. But I know God exists because of you, and so for faith I have no need to search. Dear Mother, you are day and I am night. Your likes and thoughts are rarely like my own. But we are both quite quirky and obsessed, so parts of us from some same seeds were sown. You get down on your knees to scrub the floors, for cleanliness is godliness you say. My life is filled with work done by my brain. With time left over, I just like to play! Dear Mom, you sacrificed so very much while I went sauntering where I was led by chance! You love me, and that means a lot, yet you cannot fathom what’s in my head. I thank you, Mother, for the gift of life and my self-confidence, which you inspired by telling me how special that I was. My love of life from you, Mom, I acquired. Though we are different in many ways, we’ve met our trials, taking them in stride. In my achievements always you’ve rejoiced. In your successes too I take great pride! So on this Mother’s Day, I give my love, and flowers I’ll send too as I always do. You’re still so healthy in your 90’s while your eldest struggles far away from you.

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Date: 4/19/2025 9:57:00 AM
Dear sweet andrea How sincere and soulfully moving is your poem about your mother! Btw i love your beautiful hair and green blue eyes! So lucky youv got such gorgeous eyes! And youv written how different you are to your mother here but how grateful you are for everything too! Which is very heart touching to read! Wow she is 90, I definitely need to know her diet! Pleasure reading your poem! Best wishes in the contest! Sending you light always
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Date: 4/19/2025 1:57:00 PM
Thanks, Ink. As for my mom's diet , she is kind of anorexic. You don't want her diet, believe me!! I think she weighs under 100 pounds and she looked perfectly fine at 120! Like I said. My mom has obsessions and her weight is one of them. She is 93 and probably has less problems than I do. I wish I took after my mom's side of the family with genetics!
Date: 4/18/2025 7:53:00 PM
A nice tribute to mother.Her love for her children is unconditional.she is God's gift to us .
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Date: 4/18/2025 6:26:00 PM
God bless your mom in her 90s. Your poem is a sweet tribute Andrea. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/18/2025 2:47:00 PM
What a Lovely tribute write. I enjoyed reading this. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful spring day and Blessed Easter.........
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Date: 4/18/2025 2:01:00 PM
wonderfully expressed, andrea! you've said so much in this poem and have captured your similarities and differences from your mother quite masterfully. best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 4/18/2025 11:42:00 AM
- How lucky you are to still have your mother, Andrea ... an emotional poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/18/2025 10:44:00 AM
Nice tribute to your Mom on Mother's day!
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