Oh Moon

Oh moon!~
here I am again,
though I know you
not the source of light – 

yet, somewhat, nearer myself
you tend to open more in the night,
shine less reluctant 
when the world seems further
away
from
public

less exposing

perhaps, less severely
judging

your light compassionately 
muted, for sore hearts to freely
pour-out

not feeling so harshly evaluated
every beat counted, every pulse
needing guarding

yours a seeming more sympathetic 
illumination~ than that dear, declarative
inner-voice, 

my echoing wisdom of glaring
remorse~ my long slate of failed dawns 
immemorial –

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Date: 1/17/2023 5:45:00 AM
Very nice! I enjoyed!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/17/2023 6:29:00 PM
Thank you, Kim; have a great evening!
Date: 1/17/2023 5:27:00 AM
The moon certainly does seem to make a good listener, and I'm sure she's heard many lovesick pleas.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/17/2023 6:30:00 PM
What the heck -- everyone loves a good listener. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/17/2023 12:28:00 AM
I love this, Joe. That wistfulness, sadness but pulling out of it sort of okay... Elizabeth
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/17/2023 5:10:00 AM
Hi Elisabeth, so pleased you enjoyed the read. Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/16/2023 4:59:00 PM
“The moon like an enchantress comes… To inspire us before the pregnant dawn.” Writing at night is best, until sleep patterns are messed up.i have had to chill out and sleep. The last phrase was so powerful Joe! Panagiota
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/16/2023 7:25:00 PM
Can't write without a fresh mind. Rest is important. Pain distracts also. Blessings my friend. Thank you.
Date: 1/16/2023 4:16:00 PM
thus the question..."what is he mooning about now".....a very nice write Joe. There is that "something" about the moon that calms and soothes....
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/16/2023 7:28:00 PM
Hi John; a lot of my writing is done at night. No more dancing for me. Thank you my friend. Have a great evening.
Date: 1/16/2023 2:05:00 PM
beautiful poetry, Joe Love to read works like this one.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/16/2023 3:54:00 PM
Delighted you like the work, Andrea; thank you so much. Have a great day!
Date: 1/16/2023 2:04:00 PM
love this moon write :)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/16/2023 3:55:00 PM
The moon seems always a dreamy topic. Thank you, Susan. Blessings.
Date: 1/16/2023 9:27:00 AM
Don't be too hard on yourself. God will always find a way.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/16/2023 11:40:00 AM
Hi Victor; thank you so much my friend. Blessings.
Date: 1/16/2023 8:47:00 AM
A remarkable, pensive poem Joe.lt does echo wisdom.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/16/2023 11:41:00 AM
So willing to forgive others, far stricter with myself. Thank you, Wen. Blessings.
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