Get Your Premium Membership

Oh Moon

Oh moon, so full, so dearly
bright, You are the light 
of lovers; misty glow of night,
Dimmer than sun, his subordinate 
reflection, yet remains he jealous 
despite; for even death, cannot silence 
love’s forever brilliance, vows
trans-versing ages--the grave a 
mere cycling phase…each new face 
a hopeful countenance—and all 
passing through such shadows
are coated, in-spite of the daze,
with a gleaming, rapturous 
glaze….

Oh Moon, your insight, unlike 
all others—though depressed 
in curfews of darkness--appealing
dread silence I call through the
thickness, while treading deep 
echoes of night—where does a 
heart sail when one beat cruelly 
sunk--leaving the other, fond memory,
but little choice than to float 
their dreams one alone...? 

Till the fog once again lifted, and 
awakened by her lips, love’s promise;
is not life so preciously gifted, to 
we unworthy yet treasured by God?
Only you, Moon, see clearly our
heartaches; and the matchless pain 
when summarily parted--our seasons 
so like your own, cold and warmth, 
dim halos and beaming glows--as 
onto occasions light simmers...to again
lustrously grow.  For humans--our
hearts free symphonies a-flutter—soul’s
mortal vehicle the spirit only intimately 
knows; let no sadness sow doubt to 
drown us, affirming for love 
that love eternally flows….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/10/2020 3:58:00 PM
Yes. The moon may wane, but surely waxes again, reflecting the human condition, unlike the constancy of the sun. Thanks, Gershon
Login to Reply
Dimino Avatar
Joe Dimino
Date: 6/12/2020 10:18:00 AM
Awaken the children, slowly, carefully...or they may be startled -- feeling little more than shadows frantic with light. The moon, the light of which a bit more subdued perhaps gives us occasion to feel deep, beneath the surface -- to listen...hear the voice of love that permeates all at the core of existence. Thank you, Gershon. Your comments made my day!
Date: 6/2/2020 12:16:00 AM
That special Luna Lady of the night and morning light whose grip on our hearts is felt so enchantingly under her glowing spell. I dearly love this poem Joe! You have an intimate understanding of her moods. I am putting this beauty into my Faves! If this is for the promise contest I hope it is honored at the top! Blessings xxoo
Login to Reply
Dimino Avatar
Joe Dimino
Date: 6/3/2020 9:22:00 AM
Isn't She something special! Love the moon, each of our celestial bodies having personality all its own. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. xxoo
Date: 5/30/2020 12:42:00 PM
A gorgeous pen showing much thought. Good one Joe Pamagiota xoxo
Login to Reply
Dimino Avatar
Joe Dimino
Date: 5/31/2020 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Pamagiota; your support is treasured. xoxo
Date: 5/27/2020 8:20:00 PM
I always did love a good poem on the subject of the moon Well done Joe.
Login to Reply
Dimino Avatar
Joe Dimino
Date: 5/27/2020 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie; have a beautiful day!!
Date: 5/20/2020 10:02:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to one of my favorite parts of the evening sky.
Login to Reply
Dimino Avatar
Joe Dimino
Date: 5/20/2020 5:19:00 PM
Ah, the moon and all its splendor! Thank you, Caren; so happy you enjoyed this one. Have a beautiful day!!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things