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Oh Meaty Peaks! a Pindaric Ode

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A ridiculous poem for my own amusement, about the serrations on my dog's lips
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Meaty Peaks

Oh Meaty Peaks! Oh meaty peaks adorn-ed on her lips, Why do you cheeky mountains there exist? You spoil the smooth mottled flip-flops, Of canines' drooping moistened chops... Oh spikes of flesh, you've piqued my interest!

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Date: 11/12/2023 3:21:00 PM
Nice thing about dogs . . . they'll hardly ever give you lip and if you make a fool of yourself she'll make a fool of herself too.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 11/22/2023 5:47:00 AM
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Serge Tolmachev
Date: 11/19/2023 1:57:00 PM
Indeed! Thanks for commenting Robert.

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