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Oh How Bright Your Eyes Did Shine

Oh How Bright Your Eyes Did Shine (by Michael P Clarke and Robert J. Lindley) Oh How Bright Your Eyes Did Shine that morning, I held you so close and the world was mine, we shared our love as the day was dawning, I drank from your goblet, our love divine. Sunlit echoes played to our beating hearts, precious, very precious our love-held Time. We had it all and all that bliss imparts, our days and nights joyous, dreams so sublime. Our song it was sung our hearts love displayed, love was our journey a heaven divine, now in our hearts memories we replay, Love in our summer that ever did shine. May forever, dawns wake us together. In true depths of love, bid us fair weather. Michael P Clarke and Robert J. Lindley collaboration. Truly was an honor and great pleasure to collaborate with my very talented friend, Micheal P. Clark on this sonnet.. Such inspiring verses Michael presented for me to write to .. Any time my friend...

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Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/24/2017 8:23:00 AM

Great collaboration Robert and Michael, your pens flow so well together it's impossible to tell who wrote what! A super 7:-)

Robert Lindley
Date: 3/24/2017 10:10:00 PM

Thank you Keith. Mike is a great writing partner and a pleasure to work with, as are you my good friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/20/2017 2:12:00 PM

ohh, greeat teamwork from the both of you, robert... i like the unique wordplay and beautiful treatment of love... huggs

Robert Lindley
Date: 3/21/2017 4:32:00 PM

Thank you Nette.. True, Mike is a wonderful poet to work with--such inspiring verses ..

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/20/2017 10:22:00 AM

Hi Robert, i loved the final outcome of our collaboration. Your words made it easy for me to share my words. It has been a pleasure and an honour. I shall definitely be back Robert. I leave you a seven for your beautiful words and this one slips into my faves. I enjoyed working with such a skillful wordsmith. Your Friend always....Mike.

Robert Lindley
Date: 3/21/2017 4:27:00 PM

Always a learning experience for me to compose with you! Truly an honor and pleasure to work together to create a collaboration. You have my sincere thanks for your kindness and generosity.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/20/2017 9:52:00 AM

Good Morning Robert. Although I do not write in the Sonnet format. She will forever remain the most beautiful and stunning of them all. The words here in your entry along with Michael Clark prove that. The theme is timeless and the words are in poetic form and voice. Wonderful work in its entirety.

Robert Lindley
Date: 3/21/2017 4:25:00 PM

Thank you Lisa. A great compliment, having read your fine poems..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2017 6:04:00 AM

- None can do a co-write better and more beautiful than this ... really a pleasure to read - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley
Date: 3/21/2017 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Sunshine. TIS ALWAYS A TRUE BLESSING TO READ YOUR COMMENTS ON MY POEMS! This collaboration with Michael was a true honor for me and a pleasure to see his talent as it was flowing forth.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 3/19/2017 10:30:00 PM

Love in our summer that ever did shine, a great remark. Lovely poetry. A7.........//hugs//Manmath

Robert Lindley
Date: 3/21/2017 4:19:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Truly was a great honor for me to compose with a poet of Michael P Clarke's caliber!

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/19/2017 4:27:00 PM

A lovely collaboration written by two masters of their craft. A magical piece:-) Very beautifully done :-) a fave, 7+ blessings, lynn

Robert Lindley
Date: 3/21/2017 4:19:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Truly was a great honor for me to compose with a poet of Michael P Clarke's caliber!